"I have to build a sandbox fast. I need to go buy some tools for plowing!" Xu Zhi scoured the farm his family owned and found a tricycle that was covered in dust tucked away in a corner. Panting like a balding old man, he doggedly rode the tricycle into the town, his body drained of energy from all the chemotherapy he was put through.
Nurturing Humanity
Urban · Three Hundred Pounds of Smile
Constant repetitions and limited depth to characters aside, the super rushed ending ruined it for me. Although I enjoyed reading this to some extent, I still feel unattached to story and the novel as a whole from the point the repetitions kicked in. The power grinding and realms aside the world background and different alien races were pretty good. Initial character interactions were good too. MCs views on appearances and the repulsive combination of his stupid and genocidal behaviours was hard to digest.
My mistake. Corrected.
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Naruto: Reborn to be a Cultivator!
Anime & Comics · Yorozuya_Rayzen
No. Next level up comes either by training and time, or, another emotional incident. The incident doesn't hv to be his loved one dying. In Nekko's case, for Rayzen that was him adjusting to the morality of ninja world. He wasn't pushed to despair, but sad by what he had done and confused as to who he has become now and what his future entailed. A big change in his moral code was making him insecure.
not yet. haven't reached the threshold yet. will soon 😅
No. From the novel ' Martial World '.
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Naruto: Reborn to be a Cultivator!
Anime & Comics · Yorozuya_Rayzen
Not those two. Just the cat masked nin. That guy begged for his death! And advised Rayzen to kill him fast. For a emotionally disturbed Rayzen, it was enough to think that 'what if' that guy was forced into doing stuff that he never wanted to. You can also consider this similar to the psychology of how people expect a serial killer to not kill by humanizing the victim as much as possible. ( movie psychology 😋). Here the root nin made Rayzen feel that he was killing a human, instead of a cold blooded ruthless mass murderer. Hence all the self-doubts.
' I was the one to take his life! I should take responsibility in knowing his life and fulfilling his wishes, if he had any. I need to absorb the speck! '
Naruto: Reborn to be a Cultivator!
Anime & Comics · Yorozuya_Rayzen
Corrected
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Naruto: Reborn to be a Cultivator!
Anime & Comics · Yorozuya_Rayzen
Good. Since Uchiha genes are amongst the best. And I assume they have the ability to break through the limits. Like there should be a gene transformation accompanying each upgrade in Sharingan.
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original Naruto: Reborn to be a Cultivator!
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Alternate Title : Rayzen and his Curios! A fan - fiction of Naruto World combined with elements of cultivation mostly from the novel 'Martial World'. Rayzen, a reincarnated soul from Earth, is born to the Uchiha clan, before the time of 4th hokage. He learns that his identity is really special and if he could not grow strong enough before someone figures it out, death will be the least of his worries. With the help of some curios, read as Rayzen smashes through all the obstacles that aim to take his life and more. ........................................ Note: This is my first fan-fic and I am writing from a smartphone, but I'll make sure the plot is upto par. The story will be slow placed and there will be a lot of time-skips in the beginning. Instagram: yorozuya_rayzen68 Chs 3.7k Colecciones
maybe Drake
The Green Jiao!
Clan Leader: My strength equals to that of the entire clan
Eastern · MoBei is MoBei