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k1lausNamikaze
10 days ago
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It's finally back! Thank you very much! I confess that I was a little uncomfortable with Gelert's scheme, after all, the position of a Rosier - Vinda Rosier, if I remember correctly - as Gelert's right-hand man, is public knowledge in the Wizarding World, Talion leaving this nugget of information going through and getting carried away with this girl's scheme is a little strange, but overall, it's a good chapter, thank you very much.

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k1lausNamikaze
1 months ago
Commented

Thank's for chapter, brother!

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k1lausNamikaze
1 months ago
Commented

Thank's broh, it's a very good.

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k1lausNamikaze
1 months ago
Commented

Thank's for chapter, author-san.

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k1lausNamikaze
1 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Your story is one of the few from the OP verse that I'm reading (one of two), and it's without a doubt one of the best I've read so far, I hope you keep up the good work.

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k1lausNamikaze
1 months ago
Replied to Uchiha_Tenshi

Neither. Scott became a genuine alpha because he was a genuine leader, when things got bad, Scott took the reins and did everything he could to ensure the integrity of his people, when something needed to be done, Scott did it, simple as that. Killing or killing excessively does not interfere in any way with your status as a Genuine Alpha.

He was going to take control. He was going to master his powers, not run from them. He'd confront Peter head-on. And if he had to kill to protect his loved ones, so be it. He wouldn't hesitate. Not even for a second. "This is my chance," he murmured. "My chance to live the life I always dreamed of." 

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k1lausNamikaze
k1lausNamikaze
2 months ago
Posted

As I read the first chapters, I realized that you made the same mistake as the original author: rushing. Everything is very fast, there are no smooth transitions between one event and another, everything happens immediately, without going into depth, without an elaborate construction of the events, things happen and that's it, simple as that. You are a beginning writer, you have good ideas and a lot of room to grow, I hope this review really helps you, I would certainly like to read new Black Clover fics.

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k1lausNamikaze
2 months ago
Posted

Why does everyone have a system these days? Also, what the hell is this first chapter? his reasoning for choosing Bibi Dong is crude, and says a lot about the character, and let's not even mention his reaction to transmigration, it's as if he were a robot.

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