It has an interesting storyline . The only error I can spot here is that the author used the simple present tense to narrate the story, which is not suitable for the first person narrative technique. The use of past tense is more suitable for this narrative technique. When describing the characters' reactions to something, the use of simple present tense is not very suitable. I hope the author can work on this to make this novel perfect. Looking forward to more interesting chapters.💚
Good plot. It just needs a lot of proofreading.
I thought I so too. It's probably a mistake
"But you have more ability than most and are more willing to help people in trouble. If one has only the idea but no ability, in my view, it's just self-disturbance; if one has ability, but lacks the will, they would be like Boss Fan. But you, Wei Ruo, have both," Zhu Zongyu evaluated Wei Ruo.
The Lucky Heiress
History · Er Fengchong
yeah, go girl
please can it be proofread. It's a little bit unclear.
I am also looking forward to the season two of this book. If you need a proof reader, I am available
It is a really good novel. I was reading on Light reader before but the updates was to slow, so I used ficool but then I could not access my I account and now I am using webnovel, all because I wanted to finish this book. I hope next time Author would not demotivate herself. If you were able to do this in your first book, I believe the subsequent ones will be better. Thanks for giving us something different. I have always supported this book and I will always support it
It's definitely because of the benefits she lost
It was said that Yun struggled to eat for several days, not sure if she was regretting the missed opportunity for a perfect marriage, or feeling sorry that the promise of a bestowed estate and subsequent help from the Xiu Family was now gone.
The Lucky Heiress
History · Er Fengchong