suphowyoubeen

6 months ago

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replace the second Panoti with him;*

Panoti who didn't know Panoti silently asked Adrian "Hey, who's he?"

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Fantasy · lucifer_2805

suphowyoubeen

6 months ago

Commented

That is how annoying*

Honestly if looks could kill, Aurora would be dead hundreds of times. That much annoying she was to everyone.

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Fantasy · lucifer_2805

suphowyoubeen

6 months ago

Commented

add a comma after Like feet* no s

Like first it stuck onto the feets of first middle aged man which would last for about two or three more hours.

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Fantasy · lucifer_2805

suphowyoubeen

6 months ago

Commented

As* if luck

Ad if luck wasn't on his side, he fell on his superior making his already loud cry even louder.

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Fantasy · lucifer_2805

suphowyoubeen

6 months ago

Commented

on* many shops

Aurora then began looking around and saw that the posters were pasted one many shops. Aside from that she also noticed one thing, the mood of everyone.

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Fantasy · lucifer_2805

suphowyoubeen

6 months ago

Commented

sighed*

Dustin nodded and threw the topic at the back of his head and looked at the dead bodies of the humans. He wanted to see if anyone was alive but sadly there wasn't so he signed and was going to look away when he heard Elora.