At the start it was very good, but at some point the MC became a deus ex machina and the story became boring. ...........................................
did he start to become like kira? "i will clean all the trashy humans of the world" kind of crazy?
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Fantasy · Fixten
arrogance supported by skill becomes confidence
His word pulled everyone else in there out of their shock, they started to mutter and gossips with each other, there was a lot of people who were bad-mouthing him and said that it was his karma for being arrogant, that he was a boast, as they secretly envy him for being outstanding.
Fantasy · KUKORO
deadshot is in the noctis team not deathstroke.
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Anime & Comics · JokerHighJack
body age: 16-17 years mind age: 5000+ years
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Anime & Comics · JokerHighJack
no harem
author pls dont drop.
yes
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Anime & Comics · Founder
dont underestimate yourself author
"Actually I'll be going to advertise my book so it's not going to take too long. At most it will take 2 days until I get back." She really did need to go sign a contract to advertise her new book that became a bit popular and was really good. (Unlike this book)
Anime & Comics · redblue
i hope you handle the redemption of vader and his trasformation in Anakin well. the story is progressing well,good job.[img=recommend]
Star Wars: A New World (Star Wars X Danmachi: Crossover)
Anime & Comics · Triple_Sweet