DevouringStar

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DevouringStar
DevouringStar
1 years ago
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I already read this fanfic until chapter 1000 or so. Overall it's a good story, the protagonist isn't a stupid person or anything like that. It's a shame that the MC ends up following Tang San and the story falls into the situation where the MC doesn't bring major changes to the story, but is there to shine in the highlights (Like the combat evaluation at the sherk academy). This goes until the spiritual masters tournament in which he does not participate with the sherk academy. Another annoying point is your system, which at a certain point was kind of "blocked" and wouldn't log in, but it was only when the MC went through a near-death event that the system decided to log in, saving the MC.

DevouringStar
DevouringStar
1 years ago
Replied to Ototsu_Yume

Do you remember the name of this FanFiction? I remember reading it, but I don't remember the name

DevouringStar
DevouringStar
2 years ago
Replied to Orthanos

Yes

DevouringStar
DevouringStar
2 years ago
Replied to ObamaUchiha

Good to know

Of course, I took advantage of the moment and asked mine to teach me how to read and write, at first she denied it, but I convinced her otherwise by saying it was so I could tell stories to Tsunade, and she fit like a glove.

The Gamer: Reincarnated in the world of Naruto

The Gamer: Reincarnated in the world of Naruto

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DevouringStar
DevouringStar
2 years ago
Replied to ObamaUchiha

If you have more skill ideas comment on an author's note

Achieving a 20-day first-part advance by acquiring my new skill [Polyglotism], it allows me to have a basic understanding of every new language I know, as well as increasing the speed of learning it by 20%.

The Gamer: Reincarnated in the world of Naruto

The Gamer: Reincarnated in the world of Naruto

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DevouringStar
DevouringStar
2 years ago
Replied to ObamaUchiha

in that case the title is wrong?

DevouringStar
DevouringStar
2 years ago
Replied to ObamaUchiha

yes, i will fix it, thanks

DevouringStar
DevouringStar
2 years ago
Replied to ObamaUchiha

Unless you are strong enough to deal with multiple heroes, your only option is to act in the dark.

'Wait! Becoming a villain is also a bad idea, who would want to live in a hole while all the heroes are after you?'

The Gamer: Reincarnated in the world of Naruto

The Gamer: Reincarnated in the world of Naruto

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DevouringStar
DevouringStar
2 years ago
Replied to Melon_Night

I think not. As dexterity improves your control over your body, 'control' improves your control over energy

DevouringStar
DevouringStar
2 years ago
Replied to Melon_Night

I do not understand

"You are right, but you must promise me that you will only study for two hours and nothing else," my mother looks at me with stern eyes and I can only nodded obediently.

The Gamer: Reincarnated in the world of Naruto

The Gamer: Reincarnated in the world of Naruto

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