Johann_Geldenhuys

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2021-01-04 Se unió South Africa
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Johann_Geldenhuys
Johann_Geldenhuys
2 years ago
Commented

bru thanks so much I loved this story and thank you for giving it a satisfying ending it's become a rare occasion.

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Johann_Geldenhuys
Johann_Geldenhuys
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Johann_Geldenhuys
Johann_Geldenhuys
3 years ago
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Poppy chuckled and said: "I am an Earthen Elf, also known as a Dwarf." 

Way of the Knights

Way of the Knights

Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow

Johann_Geldenhuys
Johann_Geldenhuys
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

Johann_Geldenhuys
Johann_Geldenhuys
Johann_Geldenhuys
3 years ago
Replied to OdinsRaven

Isnt it with his family? Or its keeping watch on the moving house he used to travel not sure...

Johann_Geldenhuys
Johann_Geldenhuys
3 years ago
Commented

Wait the supreme lord donghaung??

"It used to be a royal palace," Hua Fengliu told him. "About three hundred years ago, before Emperor Ye Qing and Donghuang the Great unified the continent. This continent was torn apart by warlords that controlled separate regions. The nation of Nandou was ruled by the Nandou family. After the continent was unified, the ruler gave a new order to this world. The Nandou family toppled and were seized from the throne. This was the mansion of the Nandou family."

The Legend of Futian

The Legend of Futian

Eastern · Jing Wuhen

Johann_Geldenhuys
Johann_Geldenhuys
3 years ago
Posted

Love the story!! Writhing quality sometimes lacking but mostly because of translation issues. I like the pace of the story, there wasn’t allot of times where I hade the feeling that it’s dragging on for contents sake. Its planned out nicely and gives me a feeling that I can read it again and find new hidden meanings Story line kind of generic(but lets be honest we love generic) I would like to see a large twist where something completely unexpected happiness but we’ll see as the story continues. Characters is great good steady progress(would like a bit more of the side cast in the form of personal story’s tho) Overall a 9/10, recommend to anyone who likes these kind of story’s but wants a change of pace. I love imagining how all this asian lore would look in a wester European style.