I know when I was writing the chapter I felt like the sentences were to long but since it was my first story I was just focusing on spelling
Just me the author shamelessly give myself 5 stars but seriously in reviews give me what you think I need to improve on and what I've done well this is my first story and I'm just trying out my skills.
I only did this because I don't want to start making a long story when I'll just drop it so I'm trying to do a short but good one that I can finish.
"Your wish has been accepted you will be reincarnated at the end of the goblet of fire you will wake up in your bed at 12 grimauld place just after Harry tells Dumbledore what happened at the graveyard good look on your journey Jack" God says.
In Harry potter as Sirius black
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