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No, I meant the same things were said in a previous chapter. 5 or 6 I think.
Gerald's jaw tightened, and he handed her the letter. "The Duke desires a punishment befitting the crime. He trusts me to handle this matter with the utmost severity."
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Romance Fantasy as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
How many chapters do we have to read of this pathetic mc who doesn't even have his memories of his past life or of the novel? Don't tell me it has to be hundreds of chapters again.
As I lay on the cold stone floor, my thoughts drifted to the trial that awaited me. I knew I had to be strong, to face whatever accusations were thrown my way with dignity and resolve.
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Romance Fantasy as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
You still have that habit of repeating the same things again and again in your novels to increase the word count. If you do this continuously then a lot of people won't like it as we will eventually have to pay you extra money only to read the same thing each chapter. Please stop repeating the things we already know and also we don't need to see the same events happen through multiple povs each time. Once or twice is fine but as I said, you have a really bad habit of repeating the same thing 3-4 times in multiple povs, author.
Gerald's jaw tightened, and he handed her the letter. "The Duke desires a punishment befitting the crime. He trusts me to handle this matter with the utmost severity."
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Romance Fantasy as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
'I am atomic', another cringe ahh author like okojus
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Path of the Extra
Fantasy · Crypthh
So you should also add the word 'now' as your sentence implies that he won't be able to use it ever.
Alas, it just wasn't possible for him to use it.
The Retired Hero is an Extra
Fantasy · Hardy1j
Then what was the point of reincarnating into a novel if he doesn't even have the memories. He's the same guy he was earlier. Nothing's changed from the novel.
I clasped my hands together. After all, this world. Wasn't there justice here? I didn't do anything wrong. Wouldn't it be god's job to ensure fairness? Is it wrong for me to believe?
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Romance Fantasy as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
Why not?
Alas, it just wasn't possible for him to use it.
The Retired Hero is an Extra
Fantasy · Hardy1j
Has Jon fallen into corruption once again? I doubt 'it' which I assume to be his father or mother would make the dog bark at him like that, not to mention the dog just absorbed his psyche. I think he could be glaring at some cloth or something hidden as that might be the cause of everything that's going on.
It looked at Jon with a fierce expression, growling continuously, baring its sharp teeth as if it had spotted a dangerous enemy.
Schoolwide Horror Survival
Horror · BWbear
Do you have a discord server, Author?
ch 24 Chapter 24: The Eerie Family Photo
Schoolwide Horror Survival
Horror · BWbear
Who's Alex?
"Hmm, it seems like Player 4 Helen, just like Player 2, must have suffered severe cognitive contamination after breaking the rules..." Alex picked up his pen and silently noted down what happened to Helen in his notebook.
Schoolwide Horror Survival
Horror · BWbear
Leon*
All the students stared gravely at the electronic whiteboard, where Player 2eon's live stream had turned into a horrific murder scene.
Schoolwide Horror Survival
Horror · BWbear
I am happy to see you. I get weak when I'm sick. I don't want to hurt you, stay away from me. Grandma is dead. The ranger can help you, he also wants to escape this place.
"...happy to see you... I get weak when sick, don't... hurt you... stay away from me. Grandma is dead... the ranger can help you, he also wants..."
Schoolwide Horror Survival
Horror · BWbear
But the note said 9 pm earlier. Is it a typo or did he forget it under the mental corruption?
The notes had already provided the method to escape—head north at 6 PM on the seventh day.
Schoolwide Horror Survival
Horror · BWbear
For some reason I feel like this rule is not fake. Mirrors usually have significance in horror stories. Either you break them all or you don't break them. The rules say don't break them all so this means nobody is gonna break them all automatically. This means that they should all be protected instead as if they were meant to be broken, he would have lost already. Thus rule 11 for sure is correct.
11.Protect all mirrors, do not break them.
Schoolwide Horror Survival
Horror · BWbear
Wow this is quite interesting. So many rules contradict each other.
8.The ranger is a hairy middle-aged man. He won't ask to visit the cottage on his own. If he tries to enter, let the dog bite him and hide in the attic.
Schoolwide Horror Survival
Horror · BWbear
Friends with benefits 🗿🗿
They were just friends with benefits, helping each other with their sexual needs. Jon positioned his thick penis at the entrance of Yara's pussy. "Remember to clean up the fake blood you poured before you leave."
Schoolwide Horror Survival
Horror · BWbear
Oh.. Bro you scared me for more than a second 💀
"Uhhh—ah, Jon, be gentle, don't leave marks!" Yara panted, her face flushed as she removed the silicone headpiece, revealing her lovely features. "I still need to attend the Halloween party later..."
Schoolwide Horror Survival
Horror · BWbear
Fair enough, sorry.
As I lay on the cold stone floor, my thoughts drifted to the trial that awaited me. I knew I had to be strong, to face whatever accusations were thrown my way with dignity and resolve.
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Romance Fantasy as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer