the story starts of well . The storyline is refreshing but the author stays on an idea for too long that it gets boring to read and the development is extremely slow
The story seems good but hard to follow through with it because of the poor grammar
the translation is unbearable hard to follow the story
The story is great the writing not so much . The writer is rushing with his/her ideas .
good point
"You ..." Why didn't you knock?"
General · Drunk Consort
It would be nice if you used the correct tense
Why does she agree to be sold when her company is worth a lot??????
I wish the female lead was sharper
The development is quite slow
the English names somehow annoy me
Triple Blessings: Mr. Fu's Passionate Pursuit
Urban · Summer's Shadows