i'm at chapter 5 right now and the story is really well written, i like the fact that the Lands Between is a real big continent in this story and even the enemy NPC's are real pepole not just mindless husks, overall its loking to be one of the best Elden Ring ff's out there ps: sorry for my english, its not my first language
Three Custodians - humanity's finest warriors, the Emperor's personal guard - were engaged in what could only be described as an enthusiastically choreographed pose-off. Their armor had been... significantly reduced, replaced by what appeared to be ceremonial loincloths. Their muscles gleamed with enough oil to incite Libertans to bring freedom, it caught the light from strategically placed lumens that someone had apparently installed for maximum dramatic effect. The background music—"AYAYAYAYA!"—seemed to materialize from nowhere, accompanied by strange symbols floating in the air that his transhuman mind somehow translated as "ゴゴゴゴゴ!"
The Primarch of Liberty
Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69
I feel something sticky on my dick and realize I'm still leaking. I wipe it off with my finger and smear it on the wall. Another piece of art for my collection.
Grey: Monsters
Anime & Comics · bjbrown
Such a good chapter
shame i dont have any more powerstones left ☹️ rly good chapter and book well done author 👍
Hard question, both are rly good worlds, but i think league is more interesting, would be fun seeing the interactions between Devas and the Darkins or Ryze
Feel free to comment, it's obviously just a pointless question that shouldn't exist.
Streamer in the Omniverse
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
A/N: I've been reading Cormac Mcarthy's Blood Meridian, so the vocabulary is somewhat in line with it's first chapter, along with the main character's backstory.
Tower of God: Sequence Strength
Others · Yesnth
Steven Armstrong stood at the viewport of the Liberty Eagles' training facility, his massive Astartes frame a result of the transformation he had undergone just months ago. At 21, he was among the oldest of the new recruits, his mind still sharp with the memories of his mortal life.
The Primarch of Liberty
Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69
It was pretty good , good job author [img=strong] Btw the story is rly promising
Also, do you guys have any feedback on the fight scene? This was my first time writing one so I'm kinda nervous about how I did it. Did you like it? Not like it? Any advice on what to do and improve if not?
In Danmachi as a Witcher
Anime & Comics · Orion_Art
Lucifer, not Lucifero? Sebastian's suspicions deepened. He pressed on, carefully choosing his next words. "By any chance, does His name start with an M—"
Reborn As Papa Silva
Anime & Comics · hmak27230