Kill_la_kill

Kill_la_kill

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Kill_la_kill
5 days ago
Commented

Author Chan I have a question why do you make it so that after a certain page you have to pay this story after a certain point falls off I'm a big fan of this story but it's not very interesting and it gets very repetitive I love the early parts of this book but after page like 230 it gets very repetitive

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Kill_la_kill
4 months ago
Replied to I_Cook_Limitlessly

That's fine. It's always best to tell the reader what's going on so you don't have any plot holes.

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Kill_la_kill
4 months ago
Replied to Kill_la_kill

And I checked the last page his stats were one, and his mana proficiency didn't go up, nor did the amount he has.

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Kill_la_kill
4 months ago
Commented

Grimbolt spear cost 100 mana not 50, and I even re read the page 3 times to make sure I didn't miss anything. Could you explain why the cost went down or fix it, please.

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Kill_la_kill
6 months ago
Commented

Are you going to add anymore

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Este libro ha sido eliminado.
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Kill_la_kill
6 months ago
Replied to DiaRaim

I'd love for him to also add Bioshock

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Kill_la_kill
6 months ago
Commented

Are you going to add more or is that all

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Kill_la_kill
9 months ago
Commented

I think you've lost a bit of the touch you had, it's lost alot of its flare, you've started doing more of third person view on it, and it's kinda disappointing it contradicting the whole point of the mc.

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Kill_la_kill
9 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule