That's fine. It's always best to tell the reader what's going on so you don't have any plot holes.
And I checked the last page his stats were one, and his mana proficiency didn't go up, nor did the amount he has.
Grimbolt spear cost 100 mana not 50, and I even re read the page 3 times to make sure I didn't miss anything. Could you explain why the cost went down or fix it, please.
Are you going to add anymore
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I'd love for him to also add Bioshock
Are you going to add more or is that all
tftc
I think you've lost a bit of the touch you had, it's lost alot of its flare, you've started doing more of third person view on it, and it's kinda disappointing it contradicting the whole point of the mc.
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Author Chan I have a question why do you make it so that after a certain page you have to pay this story after a certain point falls off I'm a big fan of this story but it's not very interesting and it gets very repetitive I love the early parts of this book but after page like 230 it gets very repetitive
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