Titan_Alpha

Titan_Alpha

male LV 14
2020-11-05 Se unió Global
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Titan_Alpha
Titan_Alpha
Titan_Alpha
1 years ago
Replied to Nii07

what I am saying is that according to soul society laws she will die as a direct participant and descendant of the main branch so you should say this au soul society is brutal as in canon if you want to save her

Yoruichi nodded, "Excellent, we're all on the same page. We'll work together to take down the Ankoku family head and his wife while making sure Kira is safe. We can't let the forbidden kido continue to control her. Let's keep each other informed and report any updates to Kisuke as soon as possible."

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Anime & Comics · Nii07

Titan_Alpha
Titan_Alpha
1 years ago
Replied to

how brutal the soul society laws are and how they treat the loser or the traitors they don't even spare the innocent if a family is proved traitors the point I am making is it doesn't matter if kira is innocent or not if her family is impaled she is executed because she is the direct Descendants of the family like sõya as he was child when he was ordered to be executed with his family

Yoruichi nodded, "Excellent, we're all on the same page. We'll work together to take down the Ankoku family head and his wife while making sure Kira is safe. We can't let the forbidden kido continue to control her. Let's keep each other informed and report any updates to Kisuke as soon as possible."

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Anime & Comics · Nii07

Titan_Alpha
Titan_Alpha
1 years ago
Commented

before writing further I would like to suggest searching for Azashiro Family in the bleach on wiki.

Yoruichi nodded, "Excellent, we're all on the same page. We'll work together to take down the Ankoku family head and his wife while making sure Kira is safe. We can't let the forbidden kido continue to control her. Let's keep each other informed and report any updates to Kisuke as soon as possible."

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Anime & Comics · Nii07

Titan_Alpha
Titan_Alpha
1 years ago
Replied to Titan_Alpha

the point I am making is who talks like that

Yoruichi smiled, "You both are too humble. Your growth is a result of both hard work and helping each other. You push each other to be the best versions of yourselves, and that's what will make you both strong. So anyways how about spending the night here it'll be like old times."

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Anime & Comics · Nii07

Titan_Alpha
Titan_Alpha
1 years ago
Commented

rather than bleach fanfiction I feel like reading those Japanese novels where the Protagonist and the people around is dumb and naive

Yoruichi smiled, "You both are too humble. Your growth is a result of both hard work and helping each other. You push each other to be the best versions of yourselves, and that's what will make you both strong. So anyways how about spending the night here it'll be like old times."

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Anime & Comics · Nii07

Titan_Alpha
Titan_Alpha
1 years ago
Commented

this is the third time you use the same lines differently

Despite the difficulty of the training, Yuichi found himself longing for it. He was fascinated by the way Suì-Fēng taught, always pushing him to his limits and beyond. With her guidance, he learned to use Hohō and Hakuda in ways he had never considered before, and he was eager to continue learning.

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Anime & Comics · Nii07

Titan_Alpha
Titan_Alpha
1 years ago
Commented

see the same thing you should write to other good writers as they don't keep repeating the same format again and again

The training sessions with Yūshirō and Suì-Fēng were intense and demanding. Mei was trained by Yūshirō who pushed her to her limits, pushing her to new heights in Hohō and Hakuda. Yuichi, on the other hand, was taught by Suì-Fēng who took a more hands-on approach.

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Anime & Comics · Nii07

Titan_Alpha
Titan_Alpha
1 years ago
Commented

can stop doing this we know he is grateful but you don't have to write 1/3 of the chapter just to write how he feels about every little detail or how grateful he is to others not to mention it's started to get annoying If you keep repeating that

The two of them made their way back to the mansion, discussing their future training plans and catching up on each other's lives. As they walked, Yuichi couldn't help but truly feel grateful for Mei's guidance and support. She had been a great mentor and he was looking forward to continuing their training and sparring sessions in the future.

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Bleach: Gazing Mirage

Anime & Comics · Nii07

Titan_Alpha
Titan_Alpha
1 years ago
Replied to OtakuSumit

it was before when he entered the city and it was mentioned when he bought their casino of their family that deal was struck

"You bought us, so we are your slaves now." Amira bitterly said. "We don't get to have a say in any of this, do we?"

Villain: The Play of Destiny

Villain: The Play of Destiny

Fantasy · FateDevilAce