The synopsis seems a little dull, but the first chapter looks promising. I can see the potential and you really have to read the first chapters first before judging.
This is actually a great book with detailed descriptions and vivid portrayals of the character and the world, although I wasn't fond of the synopsis, it was too wordy for me. But overall, this has a great start.
In Japanese, Ei means "eternal" and Rin means "Jewel".
I don't usually read Eastern Fantasy, but this is nicely written, although the first few chapters aren't captivating enough for me. Also, there are some confusing ways in which the author used quotation marks. But overall, I think this is good for those Eastern fantasy fans out there. Give it a read!
It was a little confusing at first because there wasn't anything mentioned about the setting, and the subtleness made me clueless. But after you get into the second chapter, the dialogues are great and captivating, it will make you continue reading it. Great job!
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It's interesting how well-written this is. Just by the first chapter, you can already see the potential and excitement it'll bring. I love this!
Top notch world building and the description is superb! The author's really focusing on showing the readers everything, but it started to get dull for me. There wasn't much action in the first chapters. I don't read Eastern fantasy so I'm not sure if that's how it should be. But for me, the vivid description wasn't enough to keep me. Still a great read! I'll recommend this!
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original Underneath the Silhouette
4.83 Recientemente actualizado
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4.78 Completado
[WARNING! MATURE CONTENT] Noelle lived her whole life in luxury. Anything she demanded was handed to her on a silver spoon. But not Night. A boy she desires and thinks of as her 'perfect prince'. In a sick twist of fate, Noelle's family fell into huge debt, making her view things differently. Now with a broader view and an open mind, Night doesn't seem to be as perfect as he was in Noelle's eyes. COMPLETED 17 JUNE 2022 to 1 JANUARY 2023 -------------------------- *Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. Discord: Fujiashi #3282 Instagram: @fujiashi Twitter: @Fujiashi_170 Chs 2.4k Colecciones
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The Fairy Queen's Resolve
4.87
[WARNING! MATURE CONTENT] "The only thing that kept me going was the hope that I could go back to my original world, the place where I belong. But now, I don't know which the real me is." Nina is a normal teenage girl who grew up in an orphanage. She was living her normal life, not until she reached the age of 19. The sudden disappearance of her best friend made everything change. In hopes of finding her best friend's whereabouts, she found a weird book in the attic which transported her to an ethereal world of magic as the Fairy Queen. But in this world, the Fairy Queen is bound to die at the hands of the Emperor. How will she cope with these sudden changes in her life, will she die as the Fairy Queen? Or will she find a way to go back to where she belongs? Titania is dead and she will die again. Amid nothing but corpses, the lady looked up and saw the glowing purple eyes of a man that stare deep into her soul. He is the double-edged sword that might become her savior or the one who'll be her doom. -------------------------- *Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. Cover art made by: Crownedwalker (deviantart) Discord: Fujiashi #3282 Instagram: @fujiashi Twitter: @Fujiashi_173 Chs 865 Colecciones
This story looks promising. The synopsis has a great hook and the story itself is fantastic. Although I am not fond of the systems genre, I could try this one. The first few chapters are kind of short for me, but overall it has a great start and a good feel to it.
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