Teozin

We know what really rules the magical world and power, will it take a long time to show the protagonist's level in magic?

I think there are too many POVs, there are 19 chapters and there have already been more than 3, in my opinion it ends up delaying the story a lot.

Will you keep this pace? I found the first 20 chapters to be very fast-paced, now it has calmed down a bit.

signed a contract, the chapters were private?

THX

good chapter

devouring this egg should give a significant boost

I didn't understand, none of them touched on the subject that the one who attacked was Desmond

What attracted me to read this was precisely this aggressiveness to react, I know he will have to go through an evolution as a person, but I would like him to maintain this personality of not letting anyone step on him.

I personally find Marvin's POV more enjoyable, but I would also find it very interesting to add POV from other characters.