UltimasPrime

Thanks you for your words.

I'm sad to say that I was informed my grandmother passed away sometime in the pass few hours.

Yes I'm shamefully giving myself a 5, but I needed to tell all of you readers something. I'm not uploading chapter 2 till I have finished chapter 5. Yes I have chapter 2, 3, and 4 done, all 3k words or more. My writing has slowed done because I've haven't been able to get on my computer for the past week and for the past 2 months my grandmother has been in the hospital. My family doesn't think she'll make it another month.😢

It was a story I was working on and accidentally made it a novel instead of a fanfic. So I remade it and Webnovel won’t let me delete this old one. I renamed it to the first thing that came to mind instead of keeping the actual storys name and took that, putting it on the new one.

Loved what You wrote so far. The only thing stopping me from giving you a 5 is that there are the occasional area where its as if your extending sentences when you dont have to. Other then that, continue the good work my fellow writer.