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Vaperrapter
Vaperrapter
2 days ago
Posted

Story is still at the beginning. Not much has happened. Grammer is good. Characters could be better written, but they are fine. My only concern is update stability and the chance of this being dropped like the author’s previous novels.

Vaperrapter
Vaperrapter
3 days ago
Commented

Cool. Thx for the chapter

Vaperrapter
Vaperrapter
10 days ago
Commented

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Hiruzen's chakra suddenly flared and an intense Yang and Fire chakra exited from every chakra point in his body. It immediately transformed into black flames and covered his entire body!

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

Vaperrapter
Vaperrapter
10 days ago
Commented

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The next day brought another mission, this time to trim the grass and shape the trees in a different garden. Upon arriving at the location, Inoiki wasted no time. Summoning his kunai, he used his telekinesis to arrange four of them in a fan formation. With a flick of concentration, the kunai spun rapidly like blades of a fan, cutting through the grass in the garden with precise control. Inoiki moved the spinning kunai across the entire lawn, trimming it all to the desired height with effortless grace.

Naruto: Konoha's Psychic

Naruto: Konoha's Psychic

Anime & Comics · Hkj

Vaperrapter
Vaperrapter
12 days ago
Commented

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There, in the fading light, Inoiki stood in deep concentration. His kunai knives floated effortlessly around him, each one glinting in the orange glow of dusk. He was using them to sculpt a rough block of stone with precise, deliberate movements. A sense of calm power radiated from the young shinobi as he worked, completely focused on the task.

Naruto: Konoha's Psychic

Naruto: Konoha's Psychic

Anime & Comics · Hkj

Vaperrapter
Vaperrapter
13 days ago
Commented

It's been 1 day tho. Am I missing something?

Gorn led him to a table where Aella, Borin, and Kael were already seated, their gear laid out on the table before them. They were checking their weapons and supplies, ensuring they were fully prepared for the journey ahead.

Summoned with an SSS-Rank Portal Skill

Summoned with an SSS-Rank Portal Skill

Fantasy · unknownwriter69

Vaperrapter
Vaperrapter
13 days ago
Commented

No sheath?

As they left the shop, William clutched his new sword tightly, his heart filled with anticipation. He was ready to embark on this new path, to hone his skills, and to become powerful.

Summoned with an SSS-Rank Portal Skill

Summoned with an SSS-Rank Portal Skill

Fantasy · unknownwriter69

Vaperrapter
Vaperrapter
13 days ago
Commented

Damn, just like that huh?

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"Enough!" Elric cut him off. "We have more heroes than we anticipated. We don't need another burden. You are hereby expelled from the Hero Squad. Begone!"

Summoned with an SSS-Rank Portal Skill

Summoned with an SSS-Rank Portal Skill

Fantasy · unknownwriter69

Vaperrapter
Vaperrapter
14 days ago
Commented

Good [img=recommend]

William clenched his fists, his gaze fixed on the steps ahead. He wasn't about to reveal his SSS-Rank skill to these people, not after years of their relentless mockery.

Summoned with an SSS-Rank Portal Skill

Summoned with an SSS-Rank Portal Skill

Fantasy · unknownwriter69

Vaperrapter
Vaperrapter
18 days ago
Commented

Cool. Thx for the chapter dude.