David_GD

David_GD

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David_GD
David_GD
2 years ago
Posted

Let me explain once again, at first I thought this was not interesting, this is just ordinary because there are too many time passes but the longer the novel gets more epic, I'm serious, you have to try.

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David_GD
David_GD
3 years ago
Posted

The synopsis is too long, but I understand why you made it so long, in order to quickly introduce Latina's past, and take her to a new world, but actually, the synopsis can still be shortened, like Latina finding a book that can speak and grant wishes, and long story short Latina has become very strong and successful managed to avenge him but he died, well but that's up to you anyway. But a long synopsis doesn't mean it's a bad thing. I think that's better.

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David_GD
David_GD
4 years ago
Commented

Oea ORA Ora

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"Hey hey, what is Miss Beauty doing here? This is not a place for someone like you?" A man with a large body approached her.

That time I reincarnated as a Bishoujo Vampire

That time I reincarnated as a Bishoujo Vampire

Fantasy · Ultima14

David_GD
David_GD
David_GD
4 years ago
Posted

Very interesting. But.......I can't tell you . ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️

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David_GD
David_GD
4 years ago
Posted

I Love It. ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️ ♥️

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