maelvoid_2025

with this vast change in his very essence hoopa should no longer be retricted by the bottle that once held his fate. the bottles retrictions were tailor made for hoopa or rather the prior version of him that went untainted. The current is an amalgamation of slanesh and hoppa which is and isnt hoppa. tszeech ls screwed, bro got to happy and dropped the ball.

Question how can the original mc use daze/mind control on his classmates when he shouldn't have had acces to them? When currentmc awoke he was fully human in all ways and only experienced the change like a few days after enrolling; which donsnt make sence if the previous mc could do it before. Did the original mc have access to all the current mc's abilites and they were only resealed before mc awkoe in the body?

Can the mc morph himself some clothes ?

Your welcome plus you can always edit the chapter reconning this pathway.

I think these past two chapters could have been done better. Alice already assumes alex saw the future with him being knowledgeable about things he shouldnt be. So it only stands to reason to first tell Alice the hole situation before while their alone as it can strengthen the buding bond between them. Plus this is Alice's past wete talking about so he should have given her the info first and let her decide whether or not the rest of the family needed to know. It also just maakes him look alot more untrustworthy in the cullens eyes seeing as he knows all this and didnt say anything before.

These last few chapters feel hastily put together and not thoughrly flushed or thought out. Its like the author changed his mind on the direction of the story abruptly.