AJPaturde

AJPaturde

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I write novels set in a Japanese setting with Action, Magic, Cultivation, and RPG Game elements. Website- https://ajpaturde.wixsite.com/official-website

2020-09-19 Se unió India
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AJPaturde
AJPaturde
1 years ago
Replied to hell_reader_boy123

Thank you so much for such a lovely review. I am glad you loved the setting. And I am honored I could make you feel nostalgic.

AJPaturde
AJPaturde
1 years ago
Posted

Yo, AJ here. I was tried of reading the same harem web novels and the cliche plot of anime in written form. My past two web novels had failed miserably, they are something I would not want anyone to read because I had written them the way web novels wanted them to be: Cheats, powers, the chosen one, magic, spells, and harem or romance. It felt so dumb. I liked anime for two years, till I watched American movies and web/tvseries. They ARE on another level. Then I found Stephen King and Steven Speilberg. Those two throw you into a different world without any drama and monologues (like in the animes where the character talks to himself in his mind). They don't spoon-feed you, unlike anime. And the plots are just created to blow your mind. Another thing I realized that was too stupid on this platform was the length of the books. They go on -- like My Vampire System, which has been going on for over two years, or that book by Legion. They were nothing like the traditional novels -- which started and ended within three hundred to four hundred pages (sometimes a thousand pages: IT by King), but they had an end. They would create a sequel (Harry Potter, Game of Thrones, and Hunger Games) if they wanted to. but they would never write infinitely, which web novel authors do. I was sick of that, seriously. And this novel is for all those who were sick of this too. You will see how I went against the rules of this platform and tried to create a trilogy that would not be of more than four-hundred chapters. And each volume will have a start and an end, not to be mistaken for an anthology series. It is like Stranger Things, where a new monster comes with every new season. I wrote the first volume in three months, then read it, then edited it by the fifth month. This is the process most web novelists don't follow. Yes, this is something traditional writers like Stephen King, J.K. Rowling, Dan Brown, Neil Gaiman, Margaret Atwood, R.L. Stine, Agatha Christie, etc., used to follow. So why upload this on web novel instead of uploading it on amazon? Three reasons: 1. I still have an income of $100 stuck with web novel. 2. The sales on this platform have reduced immensely. Where a novel would have 100,000 privilege unlocks, it now has around 70-75,000 unlocks. Which means an approx downfall of thirty percent. It tells that web novel is losing its audience. Because of what? Because of the cliche novels, copied from anime, filled with drama and stupid, senseless lengths of the novels. Web Novel needs something different -- where comes my novel (might come). If this booms, then the audience will come from Amazon KDP to web novels and I will rule the market. In other words: there is no competition for the type of novel I have written on the web novels. It is written in the style of a traditional novel. 3. To be able to publish on KDP, you need to be over eighteen, which I am not. So fu(k KDP for a month. Again, nothing guarantees the success of this kind of novel on the Web Novel, so I 'may' have little hope of this working out. But I have done my best. The best I could write and the best I would edit. If something does not suit your taste, the comment, and review section is open for all (except the trollers). So fuck!ng enjoy, for I might come as a savior for those who were sick of the typical style of web novels. I wrote this much but forgot to tell what my novel really is about. Welp, for those who are not offended for having their animes insulted (yes, they fucking suck because of the drama), go ahead and check out the synopsis. Thanks.

AJPaturde
AJPaturde
2 years ago
Replied to PrimalChaos1029

lol

His hood slid down, revealing his dark black hair. His bangs, that were covering his eyes, bounced; revealing his deep blue eyes. 

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

Games · AJPaturde

AJPaturde
AJPaturde
2 years ago
Replied to mujaki2

yeah, thought so

Hitori grabbed her from the shoulders, he hugged her and dug his face in her hair. He held her closer to his chest, "please no… Jesus, no…"

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

Games · AJPaturde

AJPaturde
AJPaturde
2 years ago
Replied to Lonely_Hermit98

I don't even know what double yang cultivation is...

"That old man… I can not believe he is on his deathbed." Saigo turned. "We two cultivated together since we were teens, I never thought a time would come where we both will have to say our goodbyes."

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

Games · AJPaturde

AJPaturde
AJPaturde
2 years ago
Replied to Vioriaindahighest

no. He hates to use magic, so he disposed the wand

Hitori's wand made an arc and reached its peak before it fell into the river, then drowned away. 

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

Games · AJPaturde

AJPaturde
AJPaturde
2 years ago
Replied to Vioriaindahighest

Thanks for that, I will try to keep the excitement under control while working on a new piece

AJPaturde
AJPaturde
2 years ago
Replied to dndeath

First-- he got the gun and the skills because his card was special. Second-- well, I use <for system's messages> and [for game's messages] Sorry for not making it clear enough, I will try better than this the next time

AJPaturde
AJPaturde
2 years ago
Replied to Lordwlesh

yeah, it does gets annoying over time

"That will be six-hundred yen, Hitori-san." She stretched out her hand to hand Hitori his card back. 

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

Games · AJPaturde

AJPaturde
AJPaturde
2 years ago
Replied to Braham_

everyone have their rules

  • Wizard Island original

    Wizard Island

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC MYSTERY DARK VAMPIRE SCARY NO-HAREM WIZARDS UNDEAD

    In the early 1980s, when the Japanese economy was booming, car trades were touching the sky, classic animes were created, and Japan was riding the economic bubble; a young writer, Hayashi Ryota, was struggling to write his novel in the bustling city of Tokyo. Feeling stuck and frustrated, he decides to escape to a remote island with his friends where he hopes to find solitude and inspiration. As Ryota immerses himself in his writing, he becomes fascinated by the island's history and its mysterious past. But his retreat is shattered when his friend goes missing. Ryota becomes deeply concerned and begins to investigate. He soon realizes that the island has a dark and mysterious past and that secrets are lurking beneath its tranquil surface. He starts to have vivid nightmares and strange visions, which make him question his sanity. He starts to fear he may be connected with the island's dark past. He must find his friend at the cost of losing himself to the island's darkness. Wizard Island by AJPaturde is different than the other web novels. It is a gripping mystery novel that takes readers on a thrilling journey to uncover the dark secrets of an isolated island. With an evocative setting and well-developed characters, this novel is a must-read for fans of suspense, mystery, and low-fantasy fiction.

    21 Chs 12 Colecciones

  • Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse original

    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse

    Games ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM CULTIVATION SURVIVAL CONQUER APOCALYPSE VIDEOGAME EVOLUTION ACADEMY

    4.28

    Humanity was finally recovering from the wave of an unknown Mana Apocalypse that had turned the world upside down. A world where Science had married Magic. Advanced technology had mixed with magic spells. Monsters took over the world and remarked earth's cities and countries as their kingdom. Half of humanity took the path of magic to survive, and half of humanity took the help of their advanced technology to survive. But what if humanity turns against humanity? The world split into two groups- The Science Users and The Mana Users Hitori, who happens to be in the Mana Users group hates magic and spells. Saibai Hitori's passion, pleasure, and happiness lie in gaming. He unlocks the solo Cultivation System and the ability to cultivate in and outside the most popular game. [The Emperor of the Apocalypse] is currently the best VRMMORGP open-world, kingdom-building survival game in the world. In this apocalyptic world, players try to clear dungeons marked on the map to mark that as their territory and eventually become the one and only Emperor of the Apocalypse. In times of destruction, trusting someone will only destroy you. Players and guilds started attacking each other in the game. Guild Vs. Guild, Player Vs. Player, Player Vs. Environment, Realm vs. Realm. Everything is on, everything is going down. Hitori's goal is to unravel the secret behind his parents' death and become the Emperor of the Apocalypse. In a world where humans evolve and survive, only I cultivate and conquer. ... .... Whenever you start reading a book, it becomes your responsibility to finish reading the book. But, the book is equally responsible to hold our attention. So, at any point, if you think that the book is unable to hold your attention anymore, drop it. Seriously, drop it. Maybe come back later to read the book. Probably the time is not good to read the novel. Or maybe your mind frame does not want to or is unable to absorb the book's content. Whatever the reason may be, drop the book. At some point in your life, you may come back to read the book, but for now, stop reading this book. --Author, AJPaturde, 1st March 2022. Thanks to my readers and my writing skills we have won WPC #264. This novel has acquired the third position in the contest, thanks. WPC #264- https://activity.webnovel.com/noah/202203019?nestedTab=tab2&tabIndex=1

    363 Chs 6.5k Colecciones

  • My System & My Academy of Superpowers original

    My System & My Academy of Superpowers

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE SYSTEM COMEDY SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED SLICEOFLIFE VAMPIRE LEVELUP EVOLUTION

    4.48

    Because of a deadly disease, the world has undergone a duration of evolution. Eighty percent of human beings have gained a superpower or 'Trait' of their own, mythological beings were no exception to this. Royal families, the Trait masters, and the Underworld. They are on the verge of wreaking a war, times are desperate than ever, for the sake of ending Underworld before a war wreaks everything the Master Organizations are training students to master their own Traits. Ryan was attacked by dangerous Mafias from the Underworld, the very same night he lost his parents in an accident. After becoming an orphan overnight he acquired an inheritance package which contained a Ring and a card which stated: "Master this Power." The Ring allows Ryan to manipulate blood but he must offer his blood as a sacrifice every time to utilize this power. A huge battle broke out when Ryan's Academy was attacked by the Underworld leading to the loss of many students' and Masters' lives. His System rewinds Ryan's death to prevent their carnage. The school soon takes a decision of shifting their students to another Academy in Japan. Ryan's life takes a sudden change, he meets vampires, werewolves, demons, angels, zombies, and ghouls. Leave the underworld, there's a war about to break between the families of these mythological creatures. Ryan decided to change his sides. No mythical being, no beasts, no monsters, no race from the other world will be able to stop Ryan on his road to become the strongest, the most popular, the most badass man ever. . Whenever you start reading a book, it becomes your responsibility to finish reading the book. But, the book is equally responsible to hold our attention. So, at any point, you think that the book is unable to hold your attention anymore, drop it. Seriously, drop it. Maybe come back later to read the book. Probably the time is not good to read the novel. Or maybe your mind frame does not want to or is unable to absorb the book's content. Whatever the reason may be, drop the book. At some point in your life, you may come back to read the book, but for now, stop reading this book. --Writer, AJPaturde, 1st October 2021. . . Additional tags (Cause WebNovel doesn't allow more than ten tags): #Transmigration #Academy #Adventure # mystery #bloodpumping #silceoflife #thriller #anime #scary #lightnovel An entry for Web Novel Spirity Awards 2021 (WSA 2021) In the Theme #Superpowers. The idea is taken from the first and fourth idea points off the #Superpowers theme. https://activity.webnovel.com/noah/20210331?nestedTab= . . My media handle is in my profile. Discord for My Ring System: https://discord.gg/rvvnYXqH6d If you wish to support me, visit my Patreon: Patreon.com/AJPaturde Happy reading!!

    387 Chs 3.5k Colecciones

  • The Paranormal system! original

    The Paranormal system!

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE SYSTEM COMEDY WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION SLICEOFLIFE EVOLUTION

    4.8 Completado

    It took me time... to figure out that this mobile is an RPG System! I can't believe I can level up in real life like it is a real-life VR Game. But, why does this System brings the Undead in front of us and wants us to finish them? We can't kill them.... right? Only if we complete all the Quests assigned by this Paranormal System, it says it will help us find our parents. I wanna find them but right now I just wanna Level Up! I kept getting Quests to kill the Undead or to save someone from the undead, etc. I was leveling up quite well too. Until this one day... when my elder sister left aboard for her studies and my friend dropped the System from her hands- like seriously?! The mobile fell, its screen shattered and..... the system rebooted. Yeah, now we gotta do everything from the start. We started our first year at the high school... everything was fine since I was not getting any quests to complete till this day: [Find fellow System users in your school.] We all System users gathered. Everyone from different classes, and different... Races. We started getting the same Quests, we started working together but with different goals. . . . My social media handle in the Profile Join my discord- https://discord.gg/GbE7xwuEJj

    247 Chs 1.9k Colecciones

    New Novel!!

    My System and My Academy of Superpowers is my new work check it!