Celestial_Valkyrie

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Celestial_Valkyrie
Celestial_Valkyrie
2 years ago
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He has a power of time. So he can make a certain place faster than the outside world. Like 1 day have passed inside a room while only 1 hour have passed outside so that he can satisfy more of his women.

Fucking all of them wasn't a problem. This would be possible given his Demigod-level physical strength and his accumulated Divine Beast bloodlines, but the real problem was time, he needed at least 5 days to get through all of them.

In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)

In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)

Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH

Celestial_Valkyrie
Celestial_Valkyrie
2 years ago
Commented

This spineless piece of sh*t. The previous chapter, he said that he's okay to have s*x with her mother, or more precisely his body's mother so he should stop saying she's his real mother. But now he's saying excuses like he doesn't want his mother to conceive his child due to complications. Just because he stick it in and came inside, doesn't mean his mother would definitely be pregnant. Even mortal earthlings have found ways to prevent pregnancy. His mother only needs to dual cultivate with him to break the curse. He should need to stop finding excuses to make it this long. This is just going into circle.

They could very well kill me, but at this point I'm not even sure I care about dying. Mom might go mad and would be sad, but at least I won't die a flippin' coward. Not having to conceive a child with my mother was a plus. I know I think she's hot and if she weren't my mom, I'd totally want to tear up that behind of hers… but since she's my mom I won't have to do something taboo if I die now.

Oh No! I switched places with someone and my Mom became a Son-con!

Oh No! I switched places with someone and my Mom became a Son-con!

Eastern · Xuefang1

Celestial_Valkyrie
Celestial_Valkyrie
2 years ago
Commented

Wtf. This MC is like a clueless NTR protagonist who was cucked behind his back. This was exactly the scene at the start of most of NTR hentais.

"Why are your faces blushing instead?" Ye Chen asked confused.

Journey To Become A True God

Journey To Become A True God

Eastern · DarkForces

Celestial_Valkyrie
Celestial_Valkyrie
3 years ago
Commented

Yeah, yeah. You already know that she will cook her tail, so why didn't you just warn her earlier? You just wasted her effort, time, and a chapter for letting it go according to the original canon. Could have just watched at her side and warn her if she was about to cut her tail.

"Even so, I won't be eating it, just because I'm not interested in eating a friend's flesh, do you get that?"

My Unconventional Delivery System!

My Unconventional Delivery System!

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Celestial_Valkyrie
Celestial_Valkyrie
3 years ago
Replied to DevilzPride

https://ranobes.net/novels/743694-journey-to-become-a-true-god.html They have all the chapters up to latest. It's free.

Celestial_Valkyrie
Celestial_Valkyrie
3 years ago
Commented

Him calling her Nana seems off, for me. I prefer him calling her Mother, because it's more exciting. If by chance we stop reading to collect a week worth of chapters for binge reading, most of the characters name would surely be forgotten by us, especially if they are not mentioned recently, and the name Nana won't give us ******uous feeling anymore, because we might have already forgotten about her being his mother if he stopped calling her that.

Este libro ha sido eliminado.
Celestial_Valkyrie
Celestial_Valkyrie
3 years ago
Replied to Celestial_Valkyrie

And also...

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Celestial_Valkyrie
Celestial_Valkyrie
3 years ago
Replied to Celestial_Valkyrie

Another one...

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Celestial_Valkyrie
Celestial_Valkyrie
3 years ago
Commented

Since Ten-tails only have one eye, I searched for someone who have a blindfold. The blindfold can be consider as a seal for her true form.

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Celestial_Valkyrie
Celestial_Valkyrie
3 years ago
Replied to Indian_Rake

Karan easily believing in Shanaya because he can detect emotions through Mara bloodline/Physique is reasonable. I even remember him saying that he didn't feel any malice from her at the time they first met. But killing the succubi is too much. As said by Oldthrall, Karan was just a normal guy not long ago. Karan at that time should have at least suck them until they became weak as a normal mortal. He could just dual cultivate with them to help them grow back faster. He could just ask Shanaya to give him more Succubi to compensate for the shortage of blood, since he needed an exact total of 20 person worth of blood to awaken his True Vampire Physique. As for what mc would give to her to return the favor, I will just leave it to the Author's imagination. I'm sure it would not be something harmful to the mc. Anyway, things already happened and I'm sure you, Author-san, will never repeat it again. I just felt it's a waste for the first succubi he met to die, 20 succubi at that. And as Author said not to expect any logic in your novel, you could have just made him suck them enough until they are mortal and raise their level back again.

1. Your thoughts on MC, Karan, and what can I improve?

Life of Debauchery with Harem of Goddesses

Life of Debauchery with Harem of Goddesses

Fantasy · Indian_Rake