I'm in the learning phase, so I highly appreciate every piece of criticism my story gets.
He yelled. They got stuck in a deadlock, and none of them seemed to budge an inch.
Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
Noted. Thanks for the comments, i will sit down to change and edit the story at one point, and your comments are very helpful. Thanks 😊
He yelled. They got stuck in a deadlock, and none of them seemed to budge an inch.
Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
yes, vit and int determines how much you have, not levels
Health: 65 — Mana: 100
Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
Not sure what you mean?
Health: 65 — Mana: 100
Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
Should be said that the deadlock wasn't meant to be going on for minutes and only a few seconds. He go out of it since he could feel him losing the fight. Could have been explained better, and thanks I will take notes of every comment and improve the story :)
He yelled. They got stuck in a deadlock, and none of them seemed to budge an inch.
Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
I have compressed the different windows so not to have it fill everything. And when he looked at the skill before, it was the skills detail window, its where the info of the skill is.
Night Slash: Dark Type
Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
The story got more developed as i wrote it, and this is one of the things i changed. My story will get an major update when i have enough material, but as it is now small errors will persists through the story.
"It is! Nice!"
Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
its not romance tagged so don't expect it
'I think I like him.'
Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
Fantasy · L0rdGr1m_
Let's get the big one out of the way first, the grammar is not the best. You are a new writer and English isn't your first language so you cant be blamed. The story and its characters are interesting and you are good at world-building, keep up the good work :)
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original Solo Player Rebirth! (webnovel)
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I haven't uploaded in a while here and that's because I'm only uploading on RR. I rewrote the story and it's available under the same name on RR or click this link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/48397/solo-player-rebirth-a-litrpg-fantasy-series Every year thousands of people get teleported into a gamelike world where they have to fight for their lives. No one has ever completed the game and the 9 pillars which are the strongest players are not even close. But the hope of completing the game still persists in most people. But will anybody ever beat it? Sung-jin is the best player that no one knows of. A solo player that is thought to be dead years ago; will he be strong enough to beat this game?23 Chs 163 Colecciones
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