I will make in some edits in the starting 6 chapters. it was all together different at the start and had to change it so it's not properly synced. just read on, its similar after 10-15 chapters. Also, only contracted authors can use italics or bold letters. I can't. [ ] are inner dialogue. what the character is thinking. in the last version I didn't put the brackets and used italics which didn't show up on thisapp
Man, I have some serious cough and my neighbours have covid, so I can't focus in anything except sleeping.
hey, did you feel weird in chapter 1 and chapter 2? I am thinking of switching chapter 1 and 2 so no flashback? does it sound better? I will make some changes to do that not literally bfhante 1 and 2
I can't understand. it's not possible to copy paste on the phone app. can you translate please
3rd world election system. 3rd world country XD
Things were fine before the pandemic. A salary of about 80k before taxes was not much here in SF but he could live off well.
Urban · Bad_Road
A story with wish fulfilment and a harem. not a big one but a harem. Bryan Best gets a system and rises to the top. It is the journey which I am trying to show or maybe the fun he had along the journey. Note: the previous version was discarded by me because it was the first time I was writing a novel and I couldn't make it Bryan centric. The MC had become an NPC in the novel which is why I redid the entire thing. Ending remarks - No NTR in any way. I mean no lesbian ntr too. Just to be clear. Bryan will be a playboy and might **** chicks outside his harem those won't be added to the main harem. may not even show up in the story later. I don't want to restrict myself here so making it clear beforehand. The story had strong sexual themes and may trigger people so reader discretion advised.
oh that. it's dropped. check for new rankings. a novel with same display picture. I reuploaded with different start and more Bryan less Betty type stuff. I made it more MC focussed unlike last time
there is. it's a harem though
It wasn't that Bryan was in love. Bryan did not love. Love turned men into Simpletons aka simps. Bryan fu cked and he wanted to know this girl just to get closer to Kevin, his personal ATM.
Urban · Bad_Road
what is not showing up?
*cough
Fantastic Life Tycoon
Urban · Bad_Road