Fallen_Divinity

Fallen_Divinity

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2020-09-02 Se unió Germany
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Fallen_Divinity
Fallen_Divinity
1 years ago
Replied to Resurgent

Hey Man! Just wanna ask. You coming back to this anytime soon or have to wait longer. Awesome work btw.

Fallen_Divinity
Fallen_Divinity
2 years ago
Commented

why does he only power up when he is beaten to death by someone. The defence he has now could easily be obtained if he did all this training before he was beaten like a dog. But Author showed how badly he was injured and now not even half step immortal ring can injure him, I don't know what to say to that!!

Fallen_Divinity
Fallen_Divinity
2 years ago
Commented

how the f*ck is he doing all this when he had no qi to begin with, even at his full strength he was not there match but now *sigh*.

Ryu raised his halberd toward Lucien one more. Unable to utilize qi, the only techniques available to him were those that relied on his body. [Lined Assault] was a technique that made the body a bow to increase speed and it was unfortunately one of the only techniques Ryu could use now…

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Fallen_Divinity
Fallen_Divinity
2 years ago
Commented

A bit too stupid don't you think!! He used the last last chapter to show that he was not a match for him in any way yet at the end his arrogance came in the way and he fought with his WEAKEST puppet ans could not even dent it. It's really frustrating to see how author praises his intelligence yet in situations like these it feels like he had not grown up at all.

Fallen_Divinity
Fallen_Divinity
2 years ago
Commented

Fuck you!! you were here training for six months before you reached this level. If you rewind a bit you were tied and pulled along like a ragdoll to the prison and she is right MC could have been killed because " Might is right". But Author is trying very hard to be unconventional and proved MC is omniscient or something. I am finding it very hard to continue with this shitty Character development

'Kill me? With just Half-Step Immortal Ring cultivation?' If Ryu wanted to, he could have escaped long ago.

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Fallen_Divinity
Fallen_Divinity
2 years ago
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Author has this really big problem of glorifying the MC. He has never cultivated and is still inexperienced and could have used some Character Development. But Author makes every secondary Character either invisible or a really shitty person. There needs to be a "Cool Grandpa" who will teach him laying low and stuff but author just keep discrediting them. The City lord was earlier presented as shrewd and calculating but now he is just an impatient man wanting to use him, such a fucking let down. He even went far as to descredit Alisa's efforts to decrease his arrogance and proved that this shitty MC was right all along and she has been the dumb one.

In the end, he could wait no longer. The matter he needed Ryu for was fast approaching and he could only swallow his pride to make a trip here personally, thinking that at the very least, Ryu would be eager to see him. But, who knew that this young man wouldn't even bother with his presence?!

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Fallen_Divinity
2 years ago
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YEP!! he is becoming more and more like a Hypocrite.

In truth, though this trial might be difficult for others, it was easy for Ryu. Reason being that this trial had no way of replicating his Northern Heavenly Wind, his Origin Flame, or his Heavenly Pupils. Still, Ryu hadn't come here to just win, he cared little for such things. He came here to break his bottleneck.

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Fallen_Divinity
2 years ago
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oh come on! she was fucking right when she said all that! the MC keeps blabbering about changing fate when fate handed him everything and the one thing he missed, he gained from the trial. He has no right to say he changed the fate. Author has quite the problem of glorifying the MC that he is right and whatnot and it's fucking bad because he just ruined the effort Alisa put by shaming him to showing him the mirror. Hey Author do you have hots for ryu? That you put him on a pedestal and shoes that he is the best?

Ailsa suddenly felt ashamed. Did she really have nine cycle of one hundred million years of experience over Ryu? Hadn't she spent all of that time in the crystal coffin, burying her consciousness into a deep slumber? What 'maturity' did that gain her, exactly?

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Fallen_Divinity
3 years ago
Replied to RaLegacy

Author!! When will you update?

Fallen_Divinity
Fallen_Divinity
3 years ago
Replied to TheShadowLord

Man why are you not updating and it's really frustrating to wait so much just to read a single chapter, that too in 2 or 3 days. You should have just stick to one novel and complete that rather than writing another novel.