they fell a 'little' too overpowered
"You're right… We indeed have a shit family." He said, rubbing his chest. "And the outcome of the fight, If there were no prying eyes, I could have gone all out." Turning around, he started walking to the main cast. "So could you. What a waste."
The Crippled Extra
Fantasy · LightOfMoon
oxygen rich*
The reason for that is that my strength is cut off by half or less. Mana veins—it's almost like veins. The purpose of veins is to collect oxygen-poor blood throughout your body and carry it back to your heart. If veins are blocked, it will cause serious health problems.
The Crippled Extra
Fantasy · LightOfMoon
I fell like something like a kukuri would be best for him as it kinda is a knife and a blade fitting his two classes
"I need a sword and… a urumi."
The Crippled Extra
Fantasy · LightOfMoon
She remained silent for a few seconds. "Let's break up, Jake." And uttered these words
The Crippled Extra
Fantasy · LightOfMoon
Hi I really like your story and this isn't really critiscm but I hope durian teaches them how to fight so that they can atleast a chance to survive because I doubt them bring so close to the barrier that they well survive without any skill when the apocalypse hits and I hope there's more interaction between them in the future
She screamed while pointing at him. "WAAAAAAAAAAA DRAKE DUISBERG WHY YOU KILLED MY SISTER!"
The Villain in Making: One Hell of a Survival
Fantasy · Champsing
I'm ChadLord, ain't no stopping me.
The Novel's Hater Is An Extra
Fantasy · ChadLord
[ChadLord: Your book is shit! Block me? I will create another account! Block me again? I will create ten other accounts!]
The Novel's Hater Is An Extra
Fantasy · ChadLord
thanks for the ch
"Oi!" But it seems this creature was more focused on what it had identified as a 'suitable mate', as it charged at him with a roar.
A Journey Unwanted
Fantasy · PocketCat2