yavanto

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yavanto
yavanto
3 years ago
Commented

Oh yes! The Golden King has arrived! <rubs hands together> Can't wait for this to unfold!!!

yavanto
yavanto
3 years ago
Commented

This paragraph is the same as the one above it except for one word.

 Will zoomed the screen for the singer to see what was going on. "We need to find them while the patrol drones are flying around the inhabited region, but locating the bunker is not easy. We could look for humans. But, in addition to your friends, there are other humans inside Neona. So we need you to locate them especifically." 

Falling for the Bad Boy in the Reverse Harem Game [BL]

Falling for the Bad Boy in the Reverse Harem Game [BL]

LGBT+ · HinataPerolada

yavanto
yavanto
3 years ago
Commented

Suggest songs that you are listening to while writing. The music the writer uses influences their work. At least l've found that to be true. I create a Playlist for whatever I'm working on.. Maybe that will help you pick. 😊

yavanto
yavanto
3 years ago
Commented

And I just bought them on Amazon!💖

yavanto
yavanto
3 years ago
Posted

A great read! I enjoyed the story line and how the brothers managed to stay together. Although I think Jess just might be my favorite character! Sometimes it's hard to find someone else who is into BL and anime.😉

yavanto
yavanto
3 years ago
Commented

I know how that goes. I'm a writer as well and you know your story so well that the mind skips or fills in spaces... 🙃😂

yavanto
yavanto
3 years ago
Commented

I love the book so far but it does get confusing at times due to translation. Also you may want to have a word check for "puppy" because when Mimi/jiji enters the story he/she is called both puppy and cat. Hope that helps!

yavanto
yavanto
3 years ago
Replied to HinataPerolada

No problem. Happy to help.

yavanto
yavanto
3 years ago
Commented

Another repeated paragraph. 😉

yavanto
yavanto
3 years ago
Commented

This is a repeated paragraph.