[1st paragraph] A very good start for a novel, and what I can say is that the author did a very good description to help paint the scenes better in our minds. But I also noticed that the authors writing stile is too informal, and I advise him to make use of any editing tool like 'quillbot' which I also use on some occasions. [2nd paragraph] A great start to a story, and I can say that the author did an excellent job of describing the scenes to help us see them better. However, I noted that the author's writing style is too casual, and I recommend that he utilize an editing tool such as 'quillbot,' which I also use on occasion. [3rd paragraph] The second paragraph is identical to the first, except that it has been edited by Quillbot to make it more professional and remove unnecessary filler words. Same with this paragraph.
A young and weak boy *who* seemed...
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Fantasy · AMonarch
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There's not much for me to say. Overall, this novel is a fantastic piece, and it is evident that the author put a lot of effort into it. The author's description is superb, probably one of the best I've seen. The interaction between the different characters is on another level entirely, and not bland like so many other novels. This novel has a specific uniqueness that intrigues the reader and makes them crave for more. But I think the only flaw it has is the update rate. If only the author could update this book regularly, it would definitely rise through the ranks in no time.
Keeps getting better
Good chapter!
A very promising beginning 👍
A very nice story with one of the best descriptions I've seen. Got me hooked right from the first chapter. And also, the way the author ends with suspense is another bonus to the story. This book will definitely top the charts if it is updated regularly and has a better cover put on it.
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original I Shall Devour the Heavens
Born from chaos, a god of ruin now trapped in mortal flesh. Renly Ashwood is bound to a mysterious book that bears record of his destiny, he walks a fragile line between what was and what could be. Haunted by guilt and desperate to forge his path, Renly seeks a place in the Crimson Moon Sect. Their trials are ruthless, the path lined with blood and ambition. Yet as his power stirs, the question arises, will he become a savior, or will the god within him awaken to devour the world once more?7 Chs 4 Colecciones
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I Have An Almighty System
Vyn, born into the legendary Aethelred family, was a stark outlier in a lineage famed across the Southern Continent Empire for its near-mythical strength and nobility. The Aethelreds, said to rival the saga of creation itself, were titans among men. Yet Vyn stood powerless, whispered to have either offended the gods or committed unforgivable sins in a past life. In a world ruled by strength, his lack of magical abilities rendered him nearly invisible. Seen as a stain on their prestigious history, the council of elders exiled him to the harsh battlefields to redeem his honor. After two relentless years fighting beasts and despair, an unimaginable twist occurred. At his lowest, a mysterious ‘System’ appeared, spouting utter nonsense. Was this a divine joke or an unexpected chance for a redemption? As bizarre messages flashed before him, Vyn faced a choice: succumb to his fate or seize this strange opportunity to rewrite his destiny. ... New chapters are updated daily, with 1-2 chapters released each day! If you're enjoying the story, please add it to your library. Your votes and reviews are a huge motivation for me, so please support the book in any way you can. Happy reading!38 Chs 356 Colecciones
The author has written an excellent piece. Scenes are well-explained, and there are some amusing moments. We'll crafted suspense at the end of each chapter, the author certainly understands how to pique the reader's interest. The update stability is also a significant plus for this book. I would definitely recommend it to anyone else.
deleteed010
Fantasy · AMonarch