Because Inkstone is weird. Fixed it.
Man, I was 15 when I wrote this, there wasn’t much thought into the council besides ‘Trope bad’.
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Hardlight Rising
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Successor doesn’ imply that. A quirk has never been transfered to her knowledge so that statement wouldn’t imply a transfer. Occam’s Razor.
Later that day, I watched him run into an attack involving the same villain, who had gotten away from me, without thinking to save his friend. There's other details to that story, but that young man reminded me what it means to be a hero, and I have asked him to be my successor.
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To find the area 4d object you use multiple 3d and 2d planes, and if it's an irregular shape, you got a use trig or vectoring. Just worded that the best way I could think of because I really didn't think people would care.
To explain the basics of seals, it's 4 dimensional trigonometry. The core concept is that a seal, well, *seals* something in a temporal or spatial barrier.
God Why Him?
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I won't do flashbacks to develop plot, as that's meaningless, I might do minor(as in hours to days) flashbacks for character development.
Hiruzen sort of just accepts that Naruto knows too much too easily (Danzo does not, btw, that'll come later), mostly I'm using guilt, but I'll write from his perspective about it.
God Why Him?
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The point of all this is Maximizing on removing flaws. Kiba is aggressive but has a clan known for medics and vets, I thought it would be a good fit, a way to calm him down a bit. Plus, he's more a medic out of necessity, Hinata will train too, but Hinata and Shino both have very skill intensive styles that take a lot of time.
"Naruto, check mine.", Sakura spoke up. She had struck up a decent friendship with Naruto and Sasuke, being in such close contact with Sasuke had killed the obsessive part of her crush early on. She could hold pretty in-depth conversations with most anyone that would talk to her. The nine had figured out who would be placed on which team already, so she, Choji, and Kiba had started practicing Iryoninjutsu for their respective teams.
God Why Him?
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It wasn't fun.
So, sitting down and writing 2000 words fucking sucks, at times. If you've ever had to do an essay for school in about two hours, you know that you make mistakes. I'm not perfect, I make plot holes, I'm not a novelist who has weeks of time to make revisions on a chapter(and even they will make giant plot holes, so I feel I'm doing pretty well). I will forget plot strings I've made. Above all else, I do not have the time or energy to source knowledge about Naruto for every fucking chapter.
God Why Him?
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original God Why Him?
A man wakes up, rather painfully, as Naruto Uzumaki, Nanadaime Hokage exteriodinaire. He'd be less upset if it didn't have to be Naruto.19 Chs 526 Colecciones
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Hardlight Rising
Hoshiko Okane is the result of generations of quirk marriages, millions of dollars in training, and a remarkable drive to do good. Raised by her mother, in the care of the HPSC, she has spent 18 years preparing to become the best hero she can be, but an unexpected opportunity has arisen, one she cannot refuse. (Cross posted by me to various sites)7 Chs 37 Colecciones
- original
Star Wars: Son of Palpatine
A man is reborn as the very intentionally created son of Palpatine in the legends continuity. After the Emperor’s death he does his damndest to pull a shattered galaxy back together in the places he can. Very, very quick start.5 Chs 200 Colecciones
- original
Naruto: Child of Sacrifice
What if Naruto wasn't the Jinchuruki? What if Minato had to live with a child not his own becoming the container for the Nine-tails? Kazuko is the unfortunate result of these questions.2 Chs 4 Colecciones
I’m very happy for the positive review, but questionable? It’s much less egregious than Yaomomo or others. I’m happy you’re enjoying the story!
Hardlight Rising
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