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A simple fix would be having someone with editing power simply read through and fix the mistakes. It honestly seems there is at least a mistake every paragraph. It is a good story but sometimes these mistakes make me have to reread just to try to understand what was meant. I’d consider reading more if these mistakes weren’t there but just type it up in google doc and it would point these simple mistakes out.
Also it was a good story but it had too many spelling errors and sometimes you’d repeat unnecessarily. I feel like I could write a story with less quality but almost no spelling errors and it would fair better.
I read up to this point because of the lack of a paywall but wont continue because of the paywall.
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As someone who is known for higher IQ and slightly lower EQ, I definitely relate to the main character once he starts getting further but it almost feels like as the author was writing he didnt have the end goal set. The reason I say this is because when most writers introduce a naming system for cultivation they might not list them all but they list all that would be known and as someone who likes to know things I feel like this would be knowledge he’d learn and the readers would then know. Overall though that is personal preference and other than that I’ve loved what I’ve read.
Is that a Wisp?
Eastern · Suiyan