Some of your points are valid. I'm just curious how you see her as bland when I gave her background and meaningful interaction at chapter 17. I also had her an established goal already at chapter 19 and her commit on it by chapter 23 (She just arrived for 3 days, don't expect her to conquer an entire territory in a short span of time). I'm just assuming you skip out on those because I clearly hinted at them.
Valaine can make more, the world is not scarce of opportunists, especially in the medieval age.
"But there is only one favored," she declared, her gaze sweeping across the frantic cultists. "But you may all vie for my attention. Cull the weak among you, and you might earn a place at my side."
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Valaine has dignity and self-respect, a queen does not eat food from the floor.
There was a reluctance within her to stoop to the level of hunting animals. It felt beneath her, a degradation of her rare vampire racial class as a Blood-Mother. Her instincts desired the fresh crimson nectar of human veins.
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She will soon make vampires of her own, what's a vampire queen without her thralls?
A moment of silence stretched between them, the weight of her demand settling like a tombstone on Drakul's pride.
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maybe soon, but Im actually referring to her combat prowess. She wasn't able to shine much.
you can't escape peak
"See? This is your new friend. His name is Kagurabachi, he's strong and gentle, just like you!" Valaine continued, her words laced with warmth and reassurance.
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1066 AD, but she doesn't know specifically yet. She only know that she arrived around the 11th and 12th century.
Exactly at 1066 when Duke William of Normandy and King Harald of Norway was trying to conquer England. I see your points and they are all valid. Thanks for pointing them out, ill rewrite all of the historical discrepancies.
Im not feeling it tbh
If readers know every detail of the MC's battle plan, the outcome of a battle will be too predictable, no anticipation. I prefer leaving small hints and the imagination to you guys. I know I can't change your mind, but give it some thought on why I chose this approach.
[DC x Overlord] Bloodbound
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