damn the referee the thief
Hi, I read the story again.
you gave up on creating the story after all it's been a long time since you released the last chapter what a shame the extremely good story
The story is interesting, but at some points MC's IQ becomes negative, to be honest as a reader, this makes me very angry. I think that improving this will make the story very good.
It's just my opinion as the reader
the story is interesting and all but it continues like this I think it will end up with a low rating
the MC is quite intelligent but out of nowhere you reduce the MC's IQ to negative to make a meaningless plot
as you are writing the story you can't realize that some things you write don't make any sense
the important thing is he doesn't think about the consequences he just goes there and does it, you know, because of a useless plot, the story is going to be bad if you keep writing like this
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