Locke039

male LV 15
2020-05-28 Se unió United States
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Locke039
Locke039
23 days ago
Posted

I just realized you are the authors who is writing Devouring Monarch as well. 😁 I read that one everyday too. I must say, I am enjoying this novel better. Keep it up!

Locke039
Locke039
4 months ago
Commented

Seriously….. come on author. It has been mentioned several times. Thirty thousand = 30,000 Three hundred thousand = 300,000

And now North City's Messenger Soldier was saying that the North Prince, with his troops, had defeated the thirty thousand-strong Barbarian Army?

Having children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wife

Having children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wife

Eastern · Summer fades into autumn.

Locke039
Locke039
5 months ago
Posted

The only complaint is that there are not enough chapters. The story is amazing and I’m sad there is only one chapter a day. Favorite novel right now!!!

Locke039
Locke039
5 months ago
Posted

Enjoying the novel so far, but I feel like the author’s note and the “dear readers” part at the end of every chapter is just to fill the character limit for the chapter. Paragraphs will also repeat. If I spend coins on your novel, please don’t make me feel like I am getting cheated out of coins/ story. Thanks.

Locke039
Locke039
1 years ago
Replied to Locke039

Sorry for the grammar error. It should be “lack”, instead of “like”.

Locke039
Locke039
1 years ago
Commented

Just a suggestion, but Ethan shouldn’t be asking every female if it feels good. He doesn’t like confidence, so he shouldn’t have to be validated by asking that and it shows he doesn’t have any confidence in bed. Last suggestion, but the pet names seem like something he wouldn’t say or at least make them better than generic ones. Maybe saying, “my dragoness” instead of baby. Anyway, your story and you don’t need me to tell you how you write. Just keep writing chapters and I will be happy. lol

Locke039
Locke039
1 years ago
Commented

I was interested in this novel until it mentioned floors that will have advanced technology. I prefer it to be one setting or the other. Good luck though author. I enjoyed it till here.

Locke039
Locke039
1 years ago
Posted

I never review a novel, but by far, this is the best story I have come across. Keep up the good work…and update more. The wait is killing me.

Locke039
Locke039
1 years ago
Replied to Tabadongus

I agree. I spent all my coins in the beginning of the month to be able to read all the chapters. Is everything okay?