Daoist994020

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2020-05-15 Se unió Global
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Daoist994020
Daoist994020
1 years ago
Posted

Overall, this is a good read in my opinion. The start of the story drew me in. The pacing is a bit off, suddenly speeding up and slowing down, though the word choice and grammar make it up for me. I see great potential in this story so I'll continue to read this story.

Este libro ha sido eliminado.
Daoist994020
Daoist994020
1 years ago
Commented

I am still waiting on the update

The truth is that I have been very busy in the last time, in addition to being up to date with the chapters that I have written. That is why I will put the novel on hold for about 12 or 13 days, I assure you that after that I will have at least 15 chapters to upload, I also do not want to leave you with nothing to have fun, so I will advance in the project I had in mind, which It already has 3 full chapters, while I finish reading Arc 4 and start 5, before finishing what is 6, I will dedicate myself to writing this novel. Besides that it will be in English so look forward to the novel.

Solo quería leer Re:Zero, Pero ahora soy un protagonista de eroge

Solo quería leer Re:Zero, Pero ahora soy un protagonista de eroge

Anime & Comics · KOTOMINE

Daoist994020
Daoist994020
3 years ago
Commented

I hope for the best

This is the first bonus chapter I posted, and it will certainly not be the last.

The Invincible Full-Moon System

The Invincible Full-Moon System

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