WHY DID YOU STOP THIS? IT IS VERY GOOD ARE YOU EVER GOING BACK TO THIS AND CONTINUE IT. ALSO I STARTED READING THE ONE WITH DARTH VADER AT HOGWARTS. THAT IS ALSO VERY GOOD. CAN'T YOU FINISH THESE STORIES THEY ARE VERY INTERISTING TO READ.
I really enjoy this book. I will love it when Severus dances with Lily. Then have Harry's reaction to it.
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Why don't you complete it before you post it . I'm tired of investing my time to novels not completed. Well I hope you continue I do enjoy this.
Get back to the story. I don't need all this technical information.
I've read this before but I like the little changes you did to the story. Keep more chapters coming this good
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Chapters are to short.
I have to drop this I'm getting tired of the interaction between Lin Bai and his girlfriend. He is treating her like a child that can't be told anything. What the he'll is the big deal if she learns he is making money.
I would like Hermione to see what James Potter is really like and see he is not as good a person as she heard.
Where's the next chapter?
Why do you drop your stories when they start getting very interesting. This is not the first time you've done this. Let us know if you are ever going back to them. Because I don't want to start reading some of your other stories. Then you will drop them after a certain time. I like what you write. But you keep dropping them. That is very irritating.
Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape(HP, Star Wars)(In process of being rewrite!)
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