So if I understand correctly, you are removing the first 24 chapters (ch 1 safe ❤️) and jumping straight into mc’s journey. Rewriting but vaguely following the original, instead of changing the beginning a bit and jumping back to where you stopped. But what about all the setup they (1-24) contain. Example: catching Mew, meeting the others at camp, him getting adopted by the Oak family, growing up with Green. And how will new readers learn about this? Will it be quickly mentioned in new ch 1 or brought up in flashbacks? And yes, I know most of this will be answered tomorrow, it’s rhetorical. I’m mostly just voicing my thoughts. But overall, I thought the setup/world-building arc was well made. It wasn’t bad, maybe cringy at some parts. Just reshape it a bit when it gets too superkid mumbo. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that your story was enjoyed by others, and not to focus too hard on every little mistake, as artists tend to do. Ps Looking forward to the new story, and Welcome Back
One of my favorite Pokémon stories is back, so yes, I do look forward to it.
Hope you readers look forward to this fanfic returning!
Anime & Comics · Aht
First off, Welcome back! 🎉 Secondly, you are forgiven however, I / we, request a wonderful story as a reward for our patience. And lastly, the story is great so far, I just reread it ( only complaint is the occasional switching between 1st and 3rd person, mid chapter.) and my hope for the mutated Eevee to become mega-omnion still burns bright.(starting to think I might be just a touch obsessed) So +1 [puts on disguise 🥸] Another +1
1. Continue the same story!
Anime & Comics · IceGlaze
After that reaction Lillie is already in, I’m interested in how mc will get the rest.
Did he turn into a vampire the same night she awakened as a wolf? Are they still connected?
"Cough, Cough," Edward coughed a little as he came out of the wall that had the silhouette of his body and says, "She's getting stronger at a very fast pace... And it's only been three days since she woke up as a wolf, soon, she won't be a fragile girl anymore... She'll turn into a gorilla."
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
My guess is the starters he doesn’t have will be with important / key characters. (Or found along the way) Example, Serena and her Fennekin (if that happens in this story)
Maybe she can get a shiny✨ turtwig/tortera with a cherry blossom tree 🌸
"Huh" hey, hey, you can't say things like that. You really have grown into a beauty with cherry colour hair and purple eyes and forget it.
Fantasy · Siddharth_Sahoo_01
"Eevee" it said before moving it's head towards my hand. I think it like my patting.
Fantasy · Siddharth_Sahoo_01
Did it take him 2 years to get through the forest. And he said Ash was bad. He was 11 when he left a few days ago, I’m just going to assume this was a typo.
Finn sighed in depression. He was already 13 years old without having any girlfriend. In the pokemon world it is normal for people above the age of 11 to have girlfriend.
Anime & Comics · Azure_warrior
And so, the journey begins Thanks for the chapter
Pokémon: A Reincarnated Tale
Anime & Comics · Aht