Zorokashi

Mooooorrreeeeee!!!!! Pleeeaaaassseee!!!! 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 I'm addicted to this Story and waiting gives me withdrawal symptoms.... I need to see Takuma meet his old friends!! ... thx for these chapters love 'em

i can't wait to read the next chapter 😖😖😖 I want to see what happens next 🥺🥺🥺 ... thx for the chapter

🤣🤣🤣🤣 I love this idea so much 🥰🤣🤣🤣

You are so brutal to your protagonists...🤔 It is kind of refreshing😅

I've read the other book of yours with the exact same story, I loved it. eventhough it only has 8 chp till now. is this like a rewrite or smth because until now it's exactly the same as the other book. And I still love it! can't wait for the story to continue past chp 8☺️

I'd love to read more!! what's going to happen now?!

Sorry I love this Book and DnD so much... I coudn´t hold myself after the Editer´s Note

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it just feels like there might be something missing, like I said up until the fight with those demon spiders everything makes sense, but ever since that woman introduced him to those Demon formations or whatever and he got these patterns the storyline just feels so segmented, or ripped apart, (I mean she even called him junior even though he's an elder)then he somehow gets a pill master that he spends a month with even though he only had 2 week until he had to fight in the tournament.the tournament is also not mentioned again after he goes on that Demon mission. plus he has endurance problems when refining pills there eventhough he literally made pills for the elders and sect master before, for hours on end??then there is this martial uncle the suddenly entered the picture, wasn't li ming supposed to be the one in the sect with the highest/most experience when it came to body cultivation, how come this uncle is now suddenly training him?I'm just so confused as to what is happening right now...😓 sorry if I misunderstood.

what happened to the tournament?ever since the chapter were the first round started the story became so incoherent, that the fight with the demons and everything after felt like it was not the plotline of the main character but someone else....🤔out of nowhere an elder got killed, then the next moment a "martial uncel" appeared who suddenly beat him senseless, in between that he started taking pill lessons and some random chick carved some type of demonic seal/Symbols in his body.... oh and he got a bird.....🤨this isn't meant to be judgmental or anything it's just that I am genuinely confused as to what is going one right now ...😓 the story is good yes, but these last couple of chapters just feel like they don't add up somehow. or is it just me not understanding?