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I think the educational model has a big problem in being based on meritocracy. Since they are at war with invaders and the children are trained to become warriors, a military model of education makes much more sense than a meritocratic one. A military model of education would be focused on unity, while a meritocratic model is the opposite, fostering individualism, which in a war can be fatal. Of course, I could be wrong, since I am only reading the beginning of the novel, it could be that they first receive an education focused on individual growth and after 15 they receive military training.

I love this novel, but I can't get into the concept of the brotherhood. I think it's too much like an edgelord and chuunibyou thing. This mission made me even more disappointed, they literally sent the MC on a suicide mission, however, even though the MC solved almost everything by himself, achieving the impossible by defeating a rank 3 as a rank 2, the guys don't give any compensation for their mistake and are still going to take 50% of the profit.

Novel logic always leaves me confused. Let's imagine the following, you try to kill someone, but that person is rescued and saved by a doctor. So, instead of planning a more effective way to kill the person you want to kill, you decide to kill the doctor who saved the person you want to kill. It makes no sense.

I was hoping that the next pet would be a chimera.

I think events in the present are better done in a descriptive way, including the characters' speeches, behaviors and reactions rather than just narrating what happened. I believe this type of narrative is best used to describe past events. Just a suggestion.

I don't know what direction this novel will take, but it would be interesting for Miguel to select talented people from the places he goes to to serve him. I don't know, he could form an organization, sect or clan. This would be cool because Miguel could help these people evolve their beasts in unknown ways, giving rise to beasts like phoenixes, dragons or qilins. As Miguel has a system, it is very likely that he will focus on summoners who are women, so his talent in relation to beasts will be explored little, so it would be interesting for him to have subordinates that he could help evolve their beasts.