BleachedKage5x0

BleachedKage5x0

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BleachedKage5x0
BleachedKage5x0
18 hours ago
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What was once a kindly old man swiftly transforms, his spine straightening and his shoulders losing their slouch, the grey hair and beard he was so proud of regaining its vibrant black sheen and his once tired grey eyes becoming alight with icy blue.

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

BleachedKage5x0
BleachedKage5x0
18 hours ago
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He looks like I just spat on his shoes, even if the slight smirk makes the act obvious "Let us just say that whenever they try and activate them, they will be in for quite the surprise." I barely manage to hear his next words "Damn, I am turning into a terrorist."

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

BleachedKage5x0
BleachedKage5x0
19 hours ago
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The promise of death and destruction must definitely did not send a shiver down my spine, no sir! I was a dignified demigod, not a tyrannical beast after all!

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

BleachedKage5x0
BleachedKage5x0
17 days ago
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Missing word in the first sentence

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"Just a few short of term announcements. First years should note that the forest on the grounds is forbidden to all students," the headmaster said. "Quidditch trials will be held two weeks from now, and any further clarifications will be handled by Madam Hooch."

Harry Potter: The Saviour's Awakening

Harry Potter: The Saviour's Awakening

Book&Literature · Midnight_Wonder

BleachedKage5x0
BleachedKage5x0
17 days ago
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This should be 1991 unless this is an AU change. Canon harry was born in 1980.

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BleachedKage5x0
BleachedKage5x0
17 days ago
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Thanks for the chapter. The paragraph separation is missing and making it a pain to read.

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BleachedKage5x0
BleachedKage5x0
1 months ago
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"Weeeel...." I trail off for a moment before offering her my trademark doom-bringer gin "How do you feel about helping me trail a cult of Hermetics and slaughtering them to the last? It will be just like old times!"

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

BleachedKage5x0
BleachedKage5x0
2 months ago
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This wall of text is hard to read

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He continued through the rooms until he reached a large hall, where there was a large wolf dozing in the center of it. "So this is the final room with the boss..." He thought as he read the dungeon instruction before using the key, he knew he needed to defeat this creature before leaving this place. After preparing himself by tightening his dagger and wand in each hand, he started by casting a bombard spell, a spell that flew straight at the wolf, waking it up with the explosion and burning its body. The wolf woke up in pain, surprised and growling, it looked at Snape at the entrance and leaped towards his attacker. Snape didn't waste time, he moved in a spinning motion with the dagger in his hand and cast another bombard spell, charging at the wolf, which dodged the attack and ran towards the small wizard. Snape, seeing it coming, ran against the wolf and threw himself on the ground, passing through the wolf's fangs as he skidded sliding quickly on the ground, grabbing a fur under the wolf, he spun his dagger and sliced its belly, while the wolf howled in pain. Snape and the wolf moved away from each other, staring at each other the next moment. The wolf, wounded, growled and opening its mouth, Snape was surprised when it accumulated from the mouth and launched a lightning bolt in his direction. Snape, still surprised, quickly used a protective spell, but a bit late, which made him be thrown back by the impact with his shield breaking. He fell a bit far, but his body withstood the impact after all his training. He got up quickly, before the wolf could get closer to deliver the final blow. He sliced the wolf's leg with the dagger and cast a bombard spell on its head, making the wolf fly a few meters and fall in pain. The wolf, still not giving up, growled at Snape, as its mouth opened to launch another lightning strike. Snape used his agility to run, while the lightning passed straight by him. He approached the wolf and cast a "Lumos" to blind it before approaching, as he did with the serpent in the desert. With its vision limited, the wolf didn't see Snape coming, who immediately jumped on it, using his physical strength and plunged the dagger into its head, making the wolf shake in pain. But Snape didn't give up, he saw that the wolf tried to open its mouth to launch another lightning bolt. Then, he took his wand, while still embedded with the other hand in its head, and cast a bomb inside its mouth, making it explode immediately and fall to the ground the next moment.

HP - Shadow Monarch!

HP - Shadow Monarch!

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

BleachedKage5x0
BleachedKage5x0
2 months ago
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Elective classes are not supposed to start until third year

On a crisp, clear morning that hinted at the onset of autumn, Izzy found herself walking toward her first elective class, Care of Magical Creatures. The path wound its way toward the edge of the Forbidden Forest, a location that struck a delicate balance between the safety of Hogwarts and the wild, untamed magic that lay within the woods. The air was fresh, carrying the earthy scent of moss and leaves, mixed with the faint aroma of distant rain.

Izanami Black

Izanami Black

Book&Literature · Undead_Raptor

BleachedKage5x0
BleachedKage5x0
2 months ago
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This is not the first spell they learn. In the movies they skipped the first lesson which was Lumos and instead moved right to Halloween which is levitation.

"The Levitation Charm, also known as Wingardium Leviosa, is a very useful spell," Flitwick explained. "It allows you to make objects fly and is particularly helpful for moving things without physical effort. Now, the key to this charm is the swish and flick motion. Watch closely."

Izanami Black

Izanami Black

Book&Literature · Undead_Raptor

  • Naruto's Ice Dragon original

    Naruto's Ice Dragon

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION ANIME NARUTO DRAGON RAREBLOODLINE BLEACH

    Currently in the process of editing/rewriting. I will continue the story after I am happy with the changes. Just an idea that popped into my head. Toshiro Hitsugaya dies in Bleach and reincarnates as a Baby in Naruto. His addition will affect the story so it will not follow canon. There will be no Zanpakuto or Kido as there is no reiatsu in Naruto. All abilities will be fully compatible with canon Naruto. I DO NOT CONSIDER BORUTO CANON. THERE WILL BE NO FORCES OR POWERS EXCLUSIVE TO BORUTO OR MOVIES. This is my second attempt at writing a fanfic and rewrite of my first. The story will be significantly different. The only thing that will remain the same is the overall concept. Disclaimer: I neither own Bleach nor Naruto nor the cover There is a German translation available on fanfiction.net under the title 'Naruto's Eis Drache' by 'infer5x0' (me). I will no longer translate the story to German as I want to fully concentrate on making the original version as good as possible.

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