A book with much potential. I hope the author keeps writing and doesn’t give up.
This story has too much Info dumps on techniques. Sometimes I think it’s a copy of the relevant wiki sites. Please author try to write those things more in your own style. You can even use AI to write it for you. But it’s getting repetitive and I really would enjoy to read how far your story goes.
Yeah, it’s a little overused. But not that much in marvel. As for afo, it should be empty. So he needs to accumulate the strength by himself.
I Think the sharingan would be perfekt for him. I know its pretty standard, but with the perception boost, he would be much stronger but not yet overpowered. I always loved kamui. Make it evolvable without weakness, but hard work to reach the full potential. The the next one should be an upgrade of the body. A unique idea could be one for all. Like everyone should know its an accumulation type of quirk. So as long, as the wealder trains he gets stronger. With this you could give his body limitless potential without instantly being op. Last should be something for the soul. But with this one you need to think about on your own
I think with the new series ATLA would be nice. And then expand to Korra. You can make the series a little more serious.
So yes the original story is coming eventually, after Horizon, and most likely one other fanfic is done. (Either ATLA, Korra, Or Fairy Tail, still undecided so feel free to let me know what you'd like)
MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
Try purple
Valeria Richards(Pics)
Marvel: Adventures of Grim Mortimer
Anime & Comics · samadomkv
Ultramarines?
"Black Templars."
Strange Rebirth(MHA)
Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
Is am a fan of those stories, where the MC first has fun with multiple women and then settles with 2 or max 3 women. It keeps the integrety of the story.
I wouldn’t create too many serums or add any more powers to the Mc. I would try to destroy the negatives of the vampirism. If you add any of those OP Serums or anything like that it will ruin the mood of twilight. And the MC can already grow his advantages without all the tinkering.
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Naruto: Faint Smile.
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER