Webnovel Author: aramirez0008 - Fanfic Collection

Overall the writing quality is good but personally if possible I would like the not mentioning rape and crippling of main character and support. Anyway the story is great has a nice them and while their is some problems with update I hope you continue this series

I like that you have dragon slayer magic but come on just buy props to save Bell aunt. As well as the other power system is not compatible with danmachi since it makes it to complicated. Focus on one power system and if you want to add those Chinese power system make with attack direction or you can use moon world Odin ruins. Well with Chinese you have to simply it since it is to complicated and annoying.