Ray_Styles

It’s so interesting and easy to read but I think it’s just a little bit better than expected . I just expected more information about the characters exceptly the main Characters .

The only thing that I could have to complain about is that the chapter is not long enough but it’s a good idea for a new story you need to do better.

The guy who was left behind on the earth what would you do if it was you Im currently thinking about how much I Would feel in that situation.

The temple settings is a little bit Slow are you going to change backgrounds it’ll just be boring if you don’t leave the temple at some point .