Miup

male LV 4

I'm a good guy :3

2020-01-27 Se unió Brazil
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Miup
Miup
3 years ago
Commented

The mc may regret that, but i sure as hell won't.

Miup
Miup
3 years ago
Posted

I came for copper but found gold! Overall i can say this novel is excellent. The writing quality, the conversation, characters and etc are all well-written and realistic. Definitely give it a try.

Miup
Miup
3 years ago
Commented

The boy is thinking with his lower head, i just hope he won't regret that.

Miup
Miup
3 years ago
Posted

Right now only a few chapters have been launched but nonetheless, it's possible to see the writing quality. It is not bad at all, it has a really small quantity of gramatical errors and a interesting story, I'm very interested in seeing where this is going. The author only writes yandere so I wouldn't recommend it if it's not your cup of tea.

Miup
Miup
3 years ago
Replied to Ru_ri

Oh, i see

Miup
Miup
3 years ago
Commented

Shouldn't it be yandere?

Miup
Miup
3 years ago
Replied to FluffyHaremPlz

The FBI shall decide your fate.

Miup
Miup
3 years ago
Commented

No problem, it's better to rewrite what you want while it's in the start otherwise you would regret that in the future.

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Miup
Miup
3 years ago
Commented

I definitely agree with Dumbass0. You should 100% go for it. It will make your history richer and give you more motivation to write. All in all, I'm loving the story, good luck!

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Miup
Miup
3 years ago
Commented

:)

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