Daniel_Aplacador_1635

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Daniel_Aplacador_1635
Daniel_Aplacador_1635
2 years ago
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We'll gonna stop here now, the new chapters seems like not from the original author anymore, the dragons were now called by color ang not like the past anymore... the plot also isn't that interesting and the essence of the whole novel seems really off right now, before this novel still made feel the dragons strongly but now those dragons feels like just some ordinary unit just like the other.....

Daniel_Aplacador_1635
Daniel_Aplacador_1635
2 years ago
Commented

The is dumb, he actually plan to use his sword? Man you already knew that the Family of the person that you killed is the one that was leading you all to their territory and you actually didn't thought that maybe some obvious information about you at that time that you killed isn't leaked to that family?

Daniel_Aplacador_1635
Daniel_Aplacador_1635
2 years ago
Replied to Oboro21

Man they were already forgotten, that's not the only problem in the plot... There's also the change of some strong unit such as the supposed to be Angel type unit changing into a Golden Lion Unit...

Daniel_Aplacador_1635
Daniel_Aplacador_1635
2 years ago
Commented

Why is it that he didn't tell the revive Naga Queen?

Daniel_Aplacador_1635
Daniel_Aplacador_1635
2 years ago
Commented

The Author clearly changed a lot of things in the novel, Bella should have an Angel unit but now it become a golden lion... Then the Mc should also have two more dragons, a fire dragon and ice dragon to be exact but now this two where forgotten already like seriously Author, you really need to take notes on the details of your novel, the inconsistencies destroying it .....

Daniel_Aplacador_1635
Daniel_Aplacador_1635
2 years ago
Commented

Mr. Author totally forgot that there's still two other dragons other than the three that he always talk about

Daniel_Aplacador_1635
Daniel_Aplacador_1635
2 years ago
Commented

Dumb Mc, it's obvious that Michelle really needs the blood essence so why compromise? He can just say that he would put it for auction if she can't afford... The guy didn't have an entrepreneur mindset at all

Daniel_Aplacador_1635
Daniel_Aplacador_1635
2 years ago
Commented

why not use the corpses as sacrific

Daniel_Aplacador_1635
Daniel_Aplacador_1635
3 years ago
Commented

seriously, first is the 3 repeated chapters then now we we're missing chapters? Please fix this!!!!!

Daniel_Aplacador_1635
Daniel_Aplacador_1635
3 years ago
Commented

Seriously 😑😑😑😑

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