Thanks for the chapters.
ch 49 C049 - Emancipation Hearing
Book&Literature · Nuclide
Thanks for the chapters. Hope he can recover soon
ch 256 CH_7.38 (256)
Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
Thanks for the chapters. It's kinda sad that he can't expose the red aurors
ch 46 C046 - School Year ends & Yet another attack
Book&Literature · Nuclide
Nice :) looking forward to it
ch 42 C042 - Pettigrew's early reveal
Book&Literature · Nuclide
I came After Reading your other Story LATV and was quiet impressed. So after you didn't Update anymore I looked If you wrote more so i startend this ff. I think it's sad that your good quality writing doesn't geht enough recognition. Have to confess I am mostly guilty of not writing down the recognition and thanks for your efforts. Would be glad to read more of your Stories both this and the LATV. If you decide to not continue this Story (which would be sad) hope we are lucky enough that you write something else. :)
ch 42 C042 - Pettigrew's early reveal
Book&Literature · Nuclide
I think it's Not healthy how he thinks. I have the tendency to analyze what could be done better and it helps you improve but it doesn't make you Happy because it's never perfect. Sometimes you have to Look at what you did good doesn't mean you can't build on top of that. definitivly harder to so when you hurt all over in the Hospitalbed.
ch 217 CH_6.46 (217)
Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
Thanks for the chapter. Just what I needed right now 😉
ch 216 CH_6.45 (216)
Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
thanks for the chapter. I would say either dig down under the earth to stall or give Up. Proved himself enough as a genin against a chunin. As Always nicely written engaging fight as well fleshing Out other characters.
ch 215 CH_6.44 (215)
Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
Thanks for the chapters but that cliff though... Hope it will be a close fight
ch 212 CH_6.41 (212)
Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
Thanks for the chapters. Reading your story makes me want to write my own because it is well written. When I start writing I stop after a while delete everything and ask why it's so hard to write something good. I like the psychological aspect and struggle in this chapter making him more human than any other Mc in all most everything I have read on webnovel. Not only FF. So thanks for the hard work
ch 206 CH_6.35 (206)
Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
Thanks for the chapters. I like the pace and that it's slow progress that takuma isn't a giga Chad who slaps every one around with his eyes closed. There are enough instant op mcs out there but little hard working ones. I would have liked to see danzos behind bars because he is just so dispicable. But there are more options for antagonist with him still free so I am excited how everything plays out and what's going to happen next. Also many more opportunities to change canon. Happy days
ch 196 CH_6.25 (196)
Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
Thanks for the notice
There is a major concern for the next 5 chapters, so I am in the process of rewriting it. I will post 2 chapter on Saturday instead after I'm done
TV · Alittlepiggy33
I am somehow too dumb to comment at the end... Just for a question do you intend to rewrite small parts to make the story more smooth or will you leave what you have written as it is? Think you could skip after the tour to let him pass out when there is no staff or teacher, won't really change anything so either is fine. I might just be grumpy because I didn't want him to get bitten 😉
End of Chapter 12~
Anime & Comics · spiderkayden
I don't think a trained assassin would let himself be bitten by a spider. Also too op is boring.
Please leave a paragraph comment on this line if you want him to stay as a supersoldier in a suit.
Anime & Comics · spiderkayden
He is strong enough I think. Trained like a soldier engineering his own suit like Tony should be fine?
ch 11 Wow. Just, Wow.
Anime & Comics · spiderkayden
4 sounds pretty good, enjoy the summer. :)
It's just that it won't be a chapter a day. I'll try to reach 4 a week, but no pinky promises cause it's summer and I'll spend some time in the sun (but only because I live next to a lake to cool down in).
A third son of prophecy (Harry Potter AU / Assassin's Creed lore)
Book&Literature · Nuclide