I also noticed i was treading water at this point. I'll go back and edit the flow of the story as I come up with more plot points.
Once inside, he closed the door and leaned against it, his mind racing with thoughts of the coin and what he could do with it. The Shielding Aura had been easy enough to activate, but there was more—so much more—that the coin could offer. The Healing Enhancement alone would make him a powerful healer, and the Guardian's Blessing could protect him from fatal harm.
Book&Literature · WesternGod
This is just a rough draft. I'll go back through in a week or so and edit my chapters so the story flows better. Thanks for the feedback.
"I'd be happy to help," Ron said, doing his best to sound calm despite the thrill of excitement coursing through him. "As long as it stays between us."
Book&Literature · WesternGod
Just the obligatory self-review! Don't mind me. 😉
thanks for translating!
If you don't know how nature or a great power decided to play a joke on the Jews, then you are out of luck, for in this galaxy the Jews are such a strange race, the Toidarians. A fat man with a scary face and wings that he uses to move above the earth.
Movies · FanFictionPremium
that was quite a jump... why did it skip ahead so far?
bro... I thought the Mc was a guy. who yhe heck names a girl after an old pervy author?
I hate mission systems.
what a great story
love the story so far!
My Understanding Is Incredible, I Built A Floating City On Hogwarts
Book&Literature · UchihaSenjuKaizo