It was better the previous one, well that one improved over time since you have to make it seem like what's greatest was focused on being different like when he fell in love with the rag, in this version that individuality of the work is not noticed preferring to fall into the same monotony of the fanfic, instead of having epic battles or transcendental events it tries to do the same as everyone else and make a Badass character who defeats them all, Overgeared is a great work because you laugh at how Grid's shitty luck saves him from harmful situations by testing him in worse situations that is his charm his overgeared but this work is forming those traits that the reader may find entertaining or interesting to advance to end up deciding to pretend that this protagonist can solve everything alone and instantly, a very good example is the guild itself that he is the leader, the guild was something that without saying it in a bad way vague and very out of place, if you read overgeared complete and read this novel you will see that there is many more errors in reference to the created world, which does not seem bad to some since in the first place there was no legendary class that is the successor of Sahara since legendary classes refer to a class of work, not a person, although the classes that do reference these are the only ones (another point in which it improved more than the original), but not everything is criticism since this story has good stories to tell such as Eve's relationship and how Odin could affect BNW but the against is that the author wants to make the story realistic without having a very large or possible Harem without taking into account that Eve made it artificial by fixing her eyes on Odin, let's remember that Eve has been with many men of all kinds due to her past in the company and that she fell in love or saw a young, arrogant man (it is not logical to justify each action but arrogance) and powerful since this is a woman who experienced all kinds of corporate hells until she rose to a height where it is possible for her to become the new ceo, it feels as if the entire character was only for fanservice later on and to introduce the world of BNW which is quite disappointing
As I said before, where are the magical and Disney things? Game of Thrones at least gives you well-explored characters and exciting situations, not wars that spoil the protagonist's ego.
You're one of those people who is told something and they start crying, right? He said a comment that came out in both the book and the movie and you get upset because someone commented that it seems like something from AI, just say no, but you start to fight just because you want to correct yourself. If this story is like how you respond to comments, I'd rather leave a bad review based on your comments and now give people the trouble of reading it. What's left over from Harry Potter?
Obviously if we came here for that we wouldn't want to watch Game of Thrones or Youjo Senki.
I base it on the fact that the oc sees others as fiction. Have you seen tsuki ga michibiku? If you have seen it you will know my dislike with this character Tomoki or even an easier one the hero of the tate no yusha arc, I do not criticize him for anything but for being a hypocrite, but I apologize if you see it as an attack it is a criticism you can take it or not it is your decision.
You know what turns your stomach more? A guy who knows someone's story and uses it to his advantage to get a 9 year old girl just because she looks like a girl from TV, do you take into account that Eris accepted the Harem because she left a deep emotional damage to Rudeus and she knew it when she left? If you go for Eris or do you manipulate her more by comparing her to a rag like many stories or is it the second because she is proud enough to refuse to be in that kind of relationship just for a pervert, look what she did to Ars when she found out about her son with her aunt she was going to kill him for that
You know if you want to make a realistic rudeus also make your character realistic, criticize him but he would go for a girl younger than him possibly manipulating her to be with him seems worse, it is hypocritical criticism of rudeus for being a pediphile but eris was how many when she had her first time with rudi 15 or 16 while most of the time shown on screen eris is as a girl or a young woman not of legal age, I say this because of the displeasure of the fics that seek to burn the mc and then glorify and beautify their ocs.
A doubt in the Harem, only Eve will be the only player or will you put others like Jishuka or Yura? If you are not interested in putting other characters from beautiful new world?
Will we see other characters from beautiful new world or just the boss?
I want to apologize because some of my information was wrong in what I said that the growth type can not be legendary, Euphemia had a legendary growth type class although the acquisition conditions were at least 10 times more difficult than those that Odin got the same type of class I do not want and I do not say that the story is bad or full of errors I just prefer to say the bad qualities before someone reads something like every reader who does not want to burn in the brain, the story is good do not look at it in depth and all good if you are an active fan of overgeared you may like it may not because of how easy it is with the mc
Saharan Successor [LitRPG, VRMMO, Elf MC]
Book&Literature · Morpheus146