Ive been trying to do my best, but ive found writing hard and your comments help me think back on parts of the book, even though its short so far , it made me realize that im world building in my head and not putting it inside the book, leading to parts being confusing and me just repeating parts more than once without realizing it Its not that i was chaning my story to fit each of your comment, it just those comments helpped point out the things i didnt explain well enough, as well as my blatant spelling mistakes and gammer error’s the problems i faced due to having no experience with writing a coherent story I already have a rough idea for the next like 3 arc’s in the story, im just trying to find a better way to express the story in a understandable way I mostly faced difficulty in the beginning because i never double check and did editing, so it came out rough, also the fact that i completely changed the original plan for the story on a whim Originally he was supposed to leave and be a loose cultivator who spent longs periods of time in secultion, But with my lack of experience i didnt really know how to write someone talking to themselves for so long without being repetitive So i added Aurora, and the story shifted but i enjoyed writing it even more, leading me to want to rewrite the beginning, as to fix the inconsistencies in my writing Hopefully you and the other readers, enjoy it as much i as enjoyed writing it But yeah i think I’ll drop all the chatpers at once, it may take awhile but i hope it will enjoyable
Ima ask your opinion on something i have begun rewriting, and adding things, i have gotten to chapter 6, should i delet the current chapters and upload the edited ones As the wouldn’t fit into the story after changes, Or should i wait and drop all chapters at once
Sororoers are bloodline mages, the get magic from their blood, while warlocks get magic crom contracts with partons, or at least this is the case for DND
Thus, no one could detect Hill's identity as a warlock.
Surviving The Fourth Calamity
Games · Naxilia
Sorrcoer and warlock are not interchangeable :/
Thus, no one could detect Hill's identity as a warlock.
Surviving The Fourth Calamity
Games · Naxilia
Finished college, started fulltime job, got hit with 2 hurricanes, i haven’t given up on this, its just been a slow process cuz lots of stuff have been happening in my life I dont even got power rn 😭
[Date: January 24, 2020]
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Urban · Legend of the Paladin
"Just kidding. With your current strength, you're more likely to send others to the Alchemist's VIP suite after rubbing them into the ground. Who could send you there? Besides, your chances of getting severely injured are slim—you usually end up dying straight away," Jiang Ziyan teased with a smile.
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Urban · Legend of the Paladin
Watch that person be the one who he is tasked to kill 😭
"I need to reach level 6 immediately," he thinks. "I'm already behind schedule." His thoughts are clear and focused. He knows what he needs to do. He remembers the pill from the inner disciple. "I'll save the inner disciple's pill for later," he decides. "It's better to use it when I'm at a bottleneck rather than right now." He thinks about the best way to use his resources.
Demonic Path: I Can Optimise
Eastern · numi_fy
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original cultivating body
archean, a reincarnator from earth, carves out his unique path in a world of cultivation25 Chs 15 Colecciones
两界：别叫我邪魔！
Two Realms Shuttle Gate: Don't Call Me a Demon!
Eastern · Jade Brocade Sword