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Teaholic, readaholic and loves writing

2019-11-13 Se unió Global

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⚠️⚠️ SPOILER WARNING ⚠️ ⚠️ After reading several transmigration and reborn/reincarnation Chinese novels and manga, I started believing that all Chinese authors are allergic to a green flag ML. However, this manga changed my mind. This was an amazing manga from start to finish!! I read it in a different site but frankly, I am so HAPPY to find this manga. It was so well written and drawn, I have so many positive thing to say about it. I ll list the negative first so that I can simp over this outstanding manga. Negative: The one and only negative thing I found was how Jiuqing became an outstanding doctor in a span of 6 months and without practice and even surpassed so many imperial doctors. It was pretty unbelievable. None of the treatment was shown and just glossed over. It was just kinda established that she was amazing but it was not shown what all she did to be that amazing, how she tested and found the issue with her patients,how she treated them, etc . Also, the language and the sentiments of the manga was a bit modern but otherwise, manga is near perfect! Postive 1) CHARACTERS: I was genuinely surprised that how many realistic and fleshed out characters were in this manga. Jiuqing, her friends, the general, the mother, the villains, everyone was so believable and did not feel like they are their just for moving the plot forward. They all felt pretty 3D characters, not all but most. PLOT: I have to admit this was the star point of this manga. The small plot points connecting to an overarching story that slowly revealed itself was very well done. I was so engaged with the story and it was very immersive and not drawn out for the sake of dragging the story. DRAWING: The drawing, though not the best, but was really well done. I loved the muted colors giving an ancient feel as if I am looking at a painting. The character's features were kinda blurry but the tone down background, and the ancient empire felt very aesthetically beautiful. Villain: I think this was a huge game changer for this manga. The villains were not all 1D mandatory villains to create obstacles for protagonists but they were actually true threats esp Lady Yan, fourth prince & the Emperor!! What was even more amazing was that the author showed that the FL and ML were not always winning but they came back strong from a loss. The conspiracies and schemes were so well written, it really made me worried for all the main leads and how they would overcome it. It was so suspenseful and immersive! Kudos to the author!! Last but not the least but I think it needs to be mentioned MALE LEAD: The biggest issue I had with all reborn/transmigration Chinese manga or novels has always been the ML.The MLs are so utterly dislikeable that I always ended up dropping the novel/manga after just a few chapters. There is never a sense of genuine bond or connection between ML and FL. It always felt very forced, one sided & obsessive. **This manga was an Exception** The ML was such a **green flag**. Yes, there were moments of jealousy and possessiveness but it was never to an extent that it turned me off. The ML was very respectful towards the FL, never got into her personal space, was understanding of her situation and profession, was protective but never overdid it, and the best of all, they formed such a real and genuine bond. Here, the love was not forced or obsessive, the ML never did anything unsightly like stalking, sexual harrasment, possessive to the point of not giving any space to the FL or letting her even speak to someone of opp gender or threatening any male who speak to FL, all of which has become a staple in all these reborn novel/manga. Their bond slowly developed over time and both gradually fell in love. I always felt butterflies in my stomach during their scenes and it felt so real. The love did not develop in weeks but it took months and years for them to form a true bond and the ML was so loveable that you cannot help but love him!!

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I am so confused with the conversation. Is it translated?? If so then the translation seem to have been done by an amateur, lots of words, sentence construction and pronoun are incorrect.

'Because of her silence about what happened that night, she discovered terrible news. Now, I just have to act like I don't remember who I am. I have no choice to do this in order to save myself'

The Reincarnated Villainess Wanted To Run Away From The Plot

The Reincarnated Villainess Wanted To Run Away From The Plot

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the door moved** to the left

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Tgen develop your skills and learn something instead of getting jealous 😒

Su Gangfeng knew that Wan Hezhi always felt inferior in front of Xuan Ruiquan. Every time the two met, Wan Hezhi would go crazy out of jealousy and inferiority.

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Fantasy · ColorfulAutumnWind

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What an awful job by the servants😒

Just when Su Gangfeng was still trembling in fear, Xuan Ruiquan walked into the outer room. His eyes flickered when he noticed a trace of oil on the surface of the round table in the center of the room. He looked at the round table for two more seconds, then turned to look at Wan Hezhi.

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Fantasy · ColorfulAutumnWind

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Is Bei Wang a way to address yourself?

Out of concern for Duan Yixin's safety, Xuan Ruiquan decided to end the investigation as soon as possible. After making his decision, he stared at Su Gangfeng and said, "Is that so? Then, Ben Wang must visit Li Junwang. Lead the way."

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Fantasy · ColorfulAutumnWind

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The ones who have no talent can only be jealous. If you want the same respect and reverence then makes achievements like he did! If you can't then shut off!

Although both were titled Junwangs, they were worlds apart. One person has the title of Yan Junwang, Zheng Bei Hou, the Master of the famous Jin Yi Army, while the other only has the empty title of Li Junwang. Because of these differences, Wan Hezhi has been full of jealousy, envy, and resentment towards Xuan Ruiquan since he was a child.

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Fantasy · ColorfulAutumnWind

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It is helpful but make sure there is no side effects to that

She pondered on Chi Xiyou's words and thoughts, 'What Elder Brother Xiyou said may be true. It seems that I need to find an opportunity to conduct more in-depth tests and experiments on the seeds of this world. But right now, this is a good thing. Because in our current situation, shorter harvest times and higher harvest results are advantageous.'

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Fantasy · ColorfulAutumnWind

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5 fay shorter? Then they grew in a day??

Thinking that the harvest time was five days shorter than before, Duan Yixin thoughtfully looked at the strawberry in her hand.

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Fantasy · ColorfulAutumnWind

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Could it be that their mother is no aware of their secret identities?? If so,how come the children knows?

Chi Xinru glanced at her mother and Duan Yixin, then at her elder brother, and nodded. Seeing that she finally calmed down, Chi Xiyou let her go. Then he looked at his father and asked, "Father, should we tell that person about this assassination attempt?"

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

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I don't understand her hatred at all. Duan Yixin has not even done anything and still she is trying to kill her...why?

Seeing that they left without even resisting, Liang Jiaying looked at the leader angrily, "What are you doing?! Why don't you do what I tell you? Hurry up and kill Duan Yixin!"

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

Transmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White Moonlight

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