Vanbun

Vanbun

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“The only thing that is beautiful as it disappears is the sun.The only thing that is beautiful to lose is in love.”-hospital ship

2019-11-02 Se unió United States
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Vanbun
Vanbun
24 days ago
Commented

There a lot of typo using he and she in the same sentence and it a bit hard to follow. At one point it’s lent he charter was having conversation, but on the other hand assumed that the storyline. Hopefully you’ll be able to fix those.

Vanbun
Vanbun
2 months ago
Commented

Clearly Ouyang tan like Qiao Fei for a long time… probably even when she was his friend’s fiancé. Feel like it’s somewhat messed up then again Tan probably never did like her

Vanbun
Vanbun
2 months ago
Commented

Why does he like her so much? And miss Qiao definitely know him and his preference

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Vanbun
2 months ago
Commented

So confusing… what does he want? So much misunderstanding that’s it a bit annoying.

Vanbun
Vanbun
2 months ago
Commented

Good job author! Story is interesting so far and I wish there more to continue reading! Please update more often! :)

Vanbun
Vanbun
1 years ago
Commented

Felt like it hasn’t end… it seem like it’s missing something still

Vanbun
Vanbun
2 years ago
Commented

This couple move fast! why does it feel like the author is just trying to wrap up everything and not rrally going into detail…

Vanbun
Vanbun
2 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Vanbun
Vanbun
2 years ago
Posted

Another unfinish story that said complete…. Will they ever complete this comic

Vanbun
Vanbun
2 years ago
Commented

Lol he gave a a definition

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