One of the best story I have read this month,,, Nice blend of Sci-fi, power, and system... Been quite some time seeing such a fleshed out story without too much off the plot holes.. Keep it up.
This fanfic is the best twilight fanfic out of all the sloppy works out there...
Keep going the story will sure gain traction. Just don't drop the story,................. ................ .keep up the good work...........
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This is really a nice story to read, it is complex and the characters are 3 dimensional and they are not idiots.
Superb brother
Brother let me tell you something... Your writing is good,, when you used to update daily, your audience engaging was also good.. But the thing where you lost is the amount of the chapters you have, if you had about 60 chapter in this story, then you have received audience even if stop updating for a few days.. The most audience a story receives is when it updates daily.. But your Unstability made new reader goes past the book, as they think "even if it's good the author has stopped writing , so we won't receive anything new, so need to waste time", And they look for the book with recent updates.. But brother,I promise you,everyday I checked this book, for it's new updates. . Well I found one today... 😁😁😁 So don't stop writing and keep patience. Good luck
The story is rich and atmospheric, evoking the sights and sounds of a grand world,while immersing readers in a labyrinth of secrets and betrayals. Love the story and continue the good work
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original Naruto: Reborn with light release
What will happen to a happy go child when he is reincarnated in the cruel universe of Naruto. He is born in a Clan that has light as their bloodline limit. where he will use his gifts to reach the top of the world together with his family. Can he adapt to the rules of this world or will he be drowned by the world's woes... There might be some wrong information, if you find any please comment. There are many AU things in this fanfic. I don't own the cover image, Just got it from Google. Only 5 chapters a week.33 Chs 616 Colecciones
Please update the chapters regularly.... Bro 🙏🙏please 🥲🥲
Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius
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